| "One Can Only Wander For So Long" Reviews/Comments [ 257 ] |
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Title: Well, it's 1:00 am....
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: March 02, 2005 04:17 EST
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Wow, and I thought I had tons of stuff going on...I'm glad you found time to get another chapter up. --- Ick, the evil 'knife' strikes again! I will refrain from using terms like 'super sleuths' and 'scooby snacks' as the mystery unfolds. *snicker* -- I thought that your *cough*lemon*cough was very nicely written. A few months ago, I might have skimmed past it...but I have been thoroughly corrupted recently and my ecchi tendencies have surfaced. At least I prefer taseful to pornographic (heavy on the graphic) scenes. When two people who care for each other make that important step in a developing relationship, it should be about the emotion and the sharing between them...not a wham-bam-thank-you-maam kind of encounter. That cheapens what should be an act of love not lust (even if it is lust driven love...but I digress. :P ) You managed to hang onto the special quality of their affection for each other while indulging in a little "pouncing" however dream induced it might have been. Most inhibitions are gone in dreams so it made it easier to just let it happen. -- Very nicely done indeed! Kudos.
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Title: One Can Only Wander For So Long
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story.I like it.I hope you finish it.If you do finish it.Please e-mail me Janie50989@sbcglobal.net.Later I'll read it again after you updated it.BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inusenshi On: February 13, 2005 18:32 EST
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PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Okayyyy....
Reviewed By: Cobalt_gaze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 23:47 EST
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did you already update? im more lost than i thought i was...damn
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Title: ish u gonna update?
Reviewed By: Cobalt_gaze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damnit.. *gets down on knees with hands clasped* plzzz,plzzz,plzzz, UPDATE!!! Well done! Now if only i could write like that*frowns*...never minde.
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Title: UPDATE UPDATE YESSSSS!!
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 01:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 out of 10 and ten gold stars!! YESS an update!! Those two chapters were awesome, it's actually worth the wait. Thanks for updating -- and I didn't mind having multiple messages in my inbox. I don't really see why anyone would. Erm -- off the subject. Well, TTYL. Which I hope will be soon.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 02:39 EST
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ow. sertainly wasn't expecting Inuyasha to cut off the womans arm. though i'm glad he didn't kill her. makes me glad that i never sit first class and that non of my flights have ever been that eventful. i'm curious to know what Kaede will say about the ring, if anything. did anyone notic the blue light around the emmit guy? i'm kind of hoping she'll just take the ring off and it can sit and brood by itself till all the spirits get distroid. i don't remember if you ever said where she got the ring from. makes me hesident to leave anything particularly special as a family possetion. o.O can't wait to read more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: Lucky me...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 13:11 EST
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You posted the next chapter right after I read this last night. Talk about coincidence. ---Great chapter. I loved how InuYasha so quickly (and bloodily) took care of the Hijackers. I wonder if there could be a job opening for Airline security for hanyou....LOL! Sorry, couldn't help myself. ---I have to tell you that, after looking over your artwork, I have absolutely fallen in love with your picture of InuYasha & Kagome "In Chains" - the smirk on his face as he's holding out the key...well, anyone can tell that he KNOWS he has the upper hand and is relishing the fact. "He he wench...payback for 'sit'ing me!" The look on Kagome's face shows that she's VERY worried, not that he won't unlock her...oh no, of course he will. But WHEN will he unlock her??? ROFLMAO!!! ----I've watched the whole series in the original Japanese, courtesy of fansubbers, and Yamaguchi Kappei is a voice acting god! I especially love it when InuYasha gets snotty. *evil grin* ----anyway, thanks for the great read and laugh (as well as the eye-candy!!)
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply wonderful story. I just found this today and I was enchanted. InuYasha cursed into a dog's form was adorable. I think that he deserves to be spoiled rotten in the worst way!! You may claim to not be talented in the "wordsmith" department, but you are dead wrong. Your plot was very original and there was plenty of fun and romance. You even touched on the dark aspect of a twisted mind. Nicely done. ---Uh oh, the serpent-headed knife is causing major damage. Good Cliffhanger. ---I would like to add that your artwork is very good too. Just lovely that you have pictures to go with your story. I will be waiting with anticipation for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:29 EST
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Nice update. poor inuyasha and kagome. does that ring have anything to do with their bonding? interesting. update sooooon!!! pez
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 14:33 EST
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WOW!! That was such an awsome chapter! I think you got the format perfect so don't worry about it, okay? Anyway, loved the fluff you gave us and the way everything is progressing smoothly. Keep up the great work and update again when you can! :)
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 04:07 EST
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ach. and just as i thought it was going to settle down, you come out with another suspencefull plot twist. i can't remember, is Kagome wearing the ring? i have a slight memory that she never takes it off, but you haven't emntioned anything like that latelly so i wasn't sure. can't wait to read more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 16:46 EST
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Hello!Hope you'll be able to update soon! ;)
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 08:04 EST
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this is a great storys and its fucking awsome that u draw pictures for it to ^_^ so please keep up both ^_^ amd update soon...ill be watching kuro
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Reviewed By: update? On: October 02, 2004 16:37 EDT
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wah, is there another update? it's been a month. please update soon.
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