| "One Can Only Wander For So Long" Reviews/Comments [ 257 ] |
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Reviewed By: sesshylover10 On: April 24, 2005 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it you deffinitly(sp) have a vivid imagination...one question how can inu and sess go out in public.i mean does everyone know that demons exist or do they use a spell to hide them selves. thats all signed: sesshylover10
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Reviewed By: Demonkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 22:55 EDT
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Your husband was stationed in Hawaii? My sister is stationed at Hawaii, i went last summer, last christmas, and the summer before. It's so pretty. If you don't mind me asking, what branch is he in? and What island were you guys in?
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Title: One can only wander for so long
Reviewed By: Jane/Sabrina On: April 18, 2005 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the great work & I hope u finish it.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Amber (foxfire730... i'm not logged in at the moment) On: April 15, 2005 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! i love this fic!!! you are such a talented writer/artist! i was practically reading the story almost for almost 3 hours. i refused to move from my spot, going from chapter 1-18. my eyes are sore though, i'll admit. i loved the lemony dream! you are so creative with everything. Examples : the ring, dreams, kikyo... also i loved keade! she seems like such a wonderful old women that would have milk and cookies wating for you as soon as you step in the door. and i can just imagine her in a floral dress watching soap operas! but she is wise none-the-less. how do you pronounce the city that they're in? anywayz, i love your story, and definately think you should go with plan A. and keep this story running even after the major plot is finished. i don't think i can ever get enough of your writing! feel free to e-mail me. i would love to talk to you and learn more of what your planning for your story. and if you have writers block, maybe i could help you out. my e-mail is amperdue91@sbcglobal.net. i look foward to hearing from you!
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Paigeypoo On: March 13, 2005 23:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are f fantastic writer and ya know what....it took me freggin 2 days to finish this cuz i could part myself from the excitment of the story. Wow i really cant wait until your next chapter so please finish it soon so i can read it.OMG it really is good.....not is not good its great.....BETTER THAN GREAT!!!! I dont care what it is. all i know is i cant wait till you finish. YAY!
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Reviewed By: dvs [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 19:35 EST
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Captivating. Had to finish in one shot. I will be looking for your next chapters impatiently.
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Reviewed By: dvs [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 19:34 EST
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Captivating. Had to finish in one shot. I will be looking for your next chapters impatiently.
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Title: Loves
Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I also enjoy your fanart. I can't believe you take that much time with this story. You are the only author I have known to take their stories as serious as you do..I think that sounds like I wanted it to..anyways, Great job on this and I'm really enjoying this story! Please update as soon as you find the time. Oh, I also like the idea of the substory things..option A. Thank you for writing this story! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: March 07, 2005 09:12 EST
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Wow, I haven't read anything with so much intentisty put into a story before. I'm glad that I took the time to read this because the picture just got to me (They are beautifully done). I hope that you do update real soon because this is so amazing I just got to know what happens next.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: lost and alome On: March 06, 2005 16:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update sooon this story is the bomb and i love it so please hurry....well good bye
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: March 03, 2005 16:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was so excited to see a chap! i'm glad you found the time to get this one out. thank you =D and i love your writing so w/e you choose is great.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: mf On: March 03, 2005 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is really good. i love it and hope you update soon. oh and i have one question. did inu and kag make love for real or was that just in the dream?
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: Lunar_storm(tis me name here forgot to login xD) On: March 02, 2005 22:51 EST
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wow that was good if only they wernt fuckin sleeping -.- but anyways i think u should just end it because some times it hard to keep writing a story or atleast make it so if u want to end it you can say what a good ending or if u wanna keep it going make it so the people can you know continue xD shit im so lost in what i just said but ANYWAYS i just want it to have a good ending and for them to have sex,in the real world not asleep ummmmmmmmmmmmmm anyways update ^_^ ill be watching ^_^ Kurok
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: March 02, 2005 20:25 EST
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Wow! That was an excellent chapter...the whole thing! I just loved all the fluff...and really...I didn't think it was all that OOC. It was a fabulous chapter and more than worth the wait! Anyway, my opinion is that you should continue on after the main plot line and tell what happens to Inuyasha and Kagome after everything that is going on is resolved. That would be more than wonderful! :) I just love your ideas and plot so its more than wanted! :) Great job!
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: Full_Blue_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 19:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i choose option A! and yeah it did take you like forever to write but i forgive u. anyway love it so romantic in so freaky sortov way. so don't be so long like last time i don't even mind if it is short, for a while i thought u gave up all hope on this story and was about to get mad but anyway love it! bye!
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