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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 21:55 CDT
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Ah so touching and so satisfying. Yay Argaus died and died with pain. It is so much more satisfying to rip such evil apart by hand. Thank you for waking Kurama up to see that Argaus truly had nothing to offer. Poor Kurama, so hard to forgive oneself for being foolish and allowing one's pain to run. Loved the way 'Laria' taunted the monster and then I was worried when she was hurt, but I shouldn't have been, Kurama is too good to allow that to happen. Enjoyed it being Hiei fighting Jargess all along, should have known he wouldn't let Laria really put herself at risk. Soooo, how long will Kurama torture himself and make both him and Hiei sad? I expect a certain amount of angst in the next chapter I just hope it wont end like DreamWeaver did with the first ending, I want happy tears this time please.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 01:36 CDT
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I'd hardly say that was piddly. Beautifully described...the image of the boiling skin makes me wince every time I think of it.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 01:18 CDT
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The first part of the first chapter was adorable, the rest vividly grotesque. The boat is unbelievably creative as a form of passage between the worlds. I say this because I have not read of such a thing before, not counting the train in Spirited Away. You have a real talent for writing and, though very morbid, I am captivated by your story.
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Reviewed By: NikkiM On: May 07, 2004 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just found this story, and I love everything about it! Your writting is supurb and I totally love how your twisted little mind works! I wonder where you get the idea's from? I really liked that mix of emotions from Kurama's captor, and still wonder if there was any truth in his feelings or is it all lies? Anyway, no matter, it was wrote splendidly, playing on the emotions of our little fox like that. So did Hiei go thru nothing at all? Wow, I woundn't have guessed any of this. I am doing my part in giving you your cocaine (this review) now I want payment (more story!) You know what happens to junkies who don't pay right? Crunch. I am glad you will be writting a book, blah, blah, blah, but now that I've found you, your leaving me. *sigh* how sad. How dare you! *bitch* *blushing, bowing* Sorry! I don't know where THAT came from. More please!
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Reviewed By: mz.bitz. On: May 05, 2004 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOSH! thank the lord. i was so scared you were going to abandon this fic. good thing i put it on my favorites and checked nearly everyday for updates. ^^;; anyway. post soon! and you should put this on other sites, its a great fic. liek adultfanfiction.net or something.
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 18:33 CDT
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Have you given up on this fic? I hope not! its good!! If so..*on knees hands folded to her chin* Please oh please write more!!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: March 27, 2004 20:43 CST
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Please update soon!! Its so good!! But.. WHat were the ribbons for?
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Reviewed By: mz.bitz. On: March 14, 2004 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i love this. usually i hate many OC things, but this, this fic was wonderfully written, highly original, and jsut amazing. you're stle or writing is like a masterpiece. wow. i almost didnt find this fic becus i mostly read fic on adultfanfiction.net this would fit wonderfully there. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: -KitsuneLover On: March 13, 2004 02:19 CST
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First, I absolutely love this fic. It's wonderfully done and it was fucking awesome. Second, If you ever do read this, will you tell me the title of the book you and your brother are writing? I'd love to read it. Just email me at KitsuneLover12@AOL.com please. Third, you got ROUS from the Fire Swamp rodents in The Princess Bride. That was a cool movie. Anyways, great story and i'm absolutely bummed to here that you wont be writing anymore fanfiction! IT JUST PLAIN SUCKS!!!! Great story!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: March 12, 2004 18:43 CST
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That was cool!! Loved it! 1You write soo awesome!! wow that was such a great thing Hiei and the dream weaver came up with !! Hurry with more!
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Title: statring things off with a bang
Reviewed By: L_N (not logged in) On: March 12, 2004 14:56 CST
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Damn, I love the way you started the fic off. Of course, what's not to love about some dirty talking demons getting it on. But it establishes the relatiionship very well for me. It wasn't nessesary to have read the prequel (but I wil now, gawddamn I will!) to follow the fic. Or the show. (Though I did watch yesterday's ep to prep for this fic!) your baddie is baaaad, too. In a sick, fascinating way. I love really well done bad guys. This one, this one takes the cake. great job!
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Reviewed By: Evvy On: March 08, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I'm so glad you updated again! Yikes, looks like both Hiei and Kurama have some guilty angst to deal with... I love how the plot is unfolding though, and can't wait until Kurama and Hiei get back together! And there HAS to be another K+H lemon!
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA *Not logged in* On: March 08, 2004 07:55 CST
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GOD DAMN IT YODA! JUST WHEN IS WAS GETTING GOOD!!!!! HOW DARE U DO THIS TO ME !!!!!! DAMN ALL!!!!! EVIL YODA EVIL CLIFFY!!!!! AHHHH! UPDATE!!!!!!! Give me Lemon Later !
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 01:23 CST
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I refuse to have hope for liking the end of this story. Refuse. I love your writing and your characters, but you cannot be trusted and I REFUSE to believe the dream. I would love to be able to believe in that dream the chapter ended with, it was lovely. Pain can mke it so easy to be manipulated by those with evil intent. The only good thing was that Hiei realized he gave Argus the tool to claim Kurama with. The only thing I will let myself hope for is that Argus dies bloody, screaming, and utterly shocked at the end of the story. You are evil at times Jen, but I'm the fool for letting it get to me.
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm BLOWN AWAY by this fic!! I'm not a big YYH fan, I've only seen a few eps, as a matter of fact, but you've completely sucked me into this storyline!! I LOVE Argaus!! He's SO deliciously wicked!! He's such an enigma! It seems that he is genuinely doing everything that his is doing because he wants Kurama's love (or at least his devotion/submission?). He SEEMS to care for Kurama, but if he truly did, why would he purposely hurt/lie to him? Selfish little demon, isn't he? I WANT MORE!! I'm DYING to find out what happens when Kurama sees that Hiei is completely unharmed, and the entire ordeal has been one big illusion!! GAH!! Why aren't you writing?!?!
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