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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 01:23 CST
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I refuse to have hope for liking the end of this story. Refuse. I love your writing and your characters, but you cannot be trusted and I REFUSE to believe the dream. I would love to be able to believe in that dream the chapter ended with, it was lovely. Pain can mke it so easy to be manipulated by those with evil intent. The only good thing was that Hiei realized he gave Argus the tool to claim Kurama with. The only thing I will let myself hope for is that Argus dies bloody, screaming, and utterly shocked at the end of the story. You are evil at times Jen, but I'm the fool for letting it get to me.
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm BLOWN AWAY by this fic!! I'm not a big YYH fan, I've only seen a few eps, as a matter of fact, but you've completely sucked me into this storyline!! I LOVE Argaus!! He's SO deliciously wicked!! He's such an enigma! It seems that he is genuinely doing everything that his is doing because he wants Kurama's love (or at least his devotion/submission?). He SEEMS to care for Kurama, but if he truly did, why would he purposely hurt/lie to him? Selfish little demon, isn't he? I WANT MORE!! I'm DYING to find out what happens when Kurama sees that Hiei is completely unharmed, and the entire ordeal has been one big illusion!! GAH!! Why aren't you writing?!?!
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Reviewed By: Flicker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aieee! PLEASE say you're not just gonna leave it there! Twisted evil demon person, torturing them like that...but it makes for a really good story ^__^ I hope that you put up the next chapter really really soon!
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Reviewed By: evvy On: February 17, 2004 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG You CANNOT end it there! I wanna know what happens... and nooo, thats so angsty I'll be depressed for the rest of my life if it doesn't end well. Please don't sign me over to a psychiatrist over this fic!
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Title: Mistress of the Sword
Reviewed By: Mistress of the Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 07:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... O_O You've seen BDS! I can never find anyone around me who knows the hotness that is Connor and Murphy! And Princess Bride as well. I think you should keep writing fanfics, even when you get published. ^^ Heh, keep it up. ~Mistress
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 19:51 CST
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WHY HOW DARE THAT MOTHER FUCKER!!!!!!! SAY THAT HIEI DOES NOT LOVE KURAMA SHAME ON U ARGAU PUSSY!!! FUCK U!! UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEE!!! I WANT LEMON SOON ! LATER
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: February 11, 2004 00:02 CST
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Great story!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 20:29 CST
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Excellent, you got your internet back. *drums her fingers together* Now not so much waiting! Argaus is cool! He's an awesome bad buy ^-^ They way you ended this chapter is is mean, though, I hope you get the next one up soon!
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Reviewed By: tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 18:35 CST
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Yay you are back on the net. Yay there is more to the story. I liked the pacingofthis chapter. It is good to know Kuramaand Hiei have friends who are willing to help. I find the pursuit of Kurama by Argaus a relief in a strange way, even though at the end of the chapter Argaus was planning on taking what he desired. He's the bad guy I'm supposed to dislike him, I'm supposed to want him to die. Even if he is well written and I can understand why he is the way he is and feel sorry for him for being lonely. Well congratulations on being picked up by a publisher and good luck with the book for you and your brother. Still I'll miss you in fanfic land.
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Reviewed By: DarkLight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God! I have read a great deal of your stories, but I believe this one has topped them all! I love that you wrote a sequel to Dream Weaver, which, I might add, is also amazingly great. I like the titles of your chapters. They're just so original! I love Argus! He's just so...evil. Please, please, please, please, PLEASE, keep up the good work!!
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Title: I LOVE YA!
Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: January 26, 2004 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marveluos my dear I loved it sensei.My dear yoda you r unique I love this ficcy . GREAT AND VERY PERVERTED BEGINING YUMMY ME LOVED ME LOVED!!!!! I hate that Arguus pussy ass fucker I hate him my poor lil Hiei and goddamn it putting Kurama in such stress DAMN U U ASSHOLE!!!! Im calm Update soon YODA!! MORE LEMONY GOODNESS! LATER!!
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Reviewed By: Angela On: January 08, 2004 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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*blink, blink* I am not sure what I just read, or if I like it or not, but...Keep writing I want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 19:17 CST
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First: ::::shiver::::: Blech do not want to see the black demon again. Marvelously horrible and he better not touch Hiei....bad things will have to be done... Liked the variety, I never mind het as long as it isn't forced on my favorite yaoi couple. I have to say I feel sorry for the girls but they were the willing idiots who chose to have sex with him. I like that Kurama is grief stricken but I hope he finds the chill in his soul so he can make that white haired bastard die screaming. It's almost like a promise to the readers that writers make, we will read your torturing our favorite characters as long as they win in the end and the bad guys die coughing up blood in the street. Love your work so I'm glad you wrote something new.
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Reviewed By: tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 13:34 CST
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Hey girl glad to see a new story from you. Even if you are torturing poor Hiei. Loved the lemon, and am even enjoying the idea of the story. Hope I like the end as much as the beginning. So you have me wondering which characters from DBZ this story started out for ;) You put me to shame, now I will have to find time to write myself. Just one small nitpick people disappear from sight not site. Unless you meant to say he left the location. Sorry to be so picky.
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Reviewed By: Rose Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 21:48 CST
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You wrote a sequel... I love you so much... *gives you a big ol' hug* Sorry you have no 'net. I'll wait here patiently for the rest!
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