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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (not logged on) On: July 13, 2004 00:10 CDT
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Very nice chapter, it almost made me cry! I hope you update soon, I hate to see them so sad. :( P.S. You said something about an editor, i'd be happy to if you need someone! P.S. My e-mail(s): cheetah_girl7@hotmail.com kagome_miko@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Kim2090 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 21:22 CDT
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I liked the chapter, and you finally updated.(Do it again soon, please). About the two stories, they both sound excelent right now,my feelings are towards "Strictly Business" but which ever you choose to do first will be OK, cause again they both sound quite interesting. Until next chapter.
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: July 12, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww. . . he's finally getting a second chance. I love your story please keep up the good work and update soon. About your story ideas I think both of them sound great! and if you still need a beta reader or editor, i'll be glad to help out! e-mail me at InuChan2787@yahoo.com or Kicks2787@cox.net love ya story AngelOfDiamonds, Lia, InuChan
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 15:31 CDT
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awww... something is saying me that it won't be a good end!!!! WHY!?!??!? I'm almost sure (and I hope I'm wrong) that Inu Yasha and Kagome won't be together!! you scare me to death ya know!! REVIEW AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I want to know the end!! PLEASE!
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Title: lost hearts
Reviewed By: inu/kaglover On: July 02, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story. hope you write soon.plz.:D
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Title: !!
Reviewed By: C to the Izzle On: June 30, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
EH! Brand New songs... you officially rule my fanfic world... woo! That's awesome... haha... seeing Inuyasha and hearing Jesse Lacey's voice at the same time could do something to a girl... lol...
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Reviewed By: Aitu- not signed in On: June 29, 2004 13:19 CDT
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Awwww! Yey! I really enjoyed this chapter! But my favorite part is still the scene when Inuyasha see's Kagome's new music video, hehehe. Maybe a Kagome asking for Inuyasha's forgivness is in order? hehehe just an idea. But keep up the great work! I'll be waiting for more. --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Doujo (didn't log in) On: June 29, 2004 09:30 CDT
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ah!!! it was about time to update! :D and you're right... it was sooooo short!! you absolutely have to continue!! try to do this every week... please! it would be so cool! ^^but I don't force you. Uh, I change my mind, I force you to do this every week!! Ja ne! :~*~: Doujo :~*~:
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Reviewed By: Auti (not logged in) On: June 01, 2004 23:46 CDT
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Awwwwwwwww! The ending of this chapter caused my heart to seriously flutter! (If that's what it did?? I think so) Dirrty was a great song for Kagome, hehehe, loved that. When I thought you ended the story at the opening of the door I was all ready to whine and complain pointlessly as if it would get me my way, but thank god you went on! but now I just wanna whine and complain that there's not more.. can never make us readers happy, can ya? Well I'm just happy that you updated. Please do more (update, that is) Until next time-- Adios!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Omi Bombay On: June 01, 2004 01:42 CDT
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This is great! My favorite stories are when Inu is a musician! Anyway, was this fic poasted somewhere else first? I don't mean to be offensive, it's just that I'm so happy I found it again! Keep up the good work. ~Omi
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Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tear tear* *cry cry* Kagome is such an ass!!! Oh sorry getting carried away. Anyway loved the story and update as soon as you can!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: May 31, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story, but I hope that Kagome doesn't forgive Inu too easily for cheating on her. Unless it turns out that Kikyo made it look like something happened when it really didn't 'cause then he wouldn't deserve it. I also don't think that you should include song lyrics in every chapter, but I understand why you do b/c your story is about musicians. It just makes me lose track of what I was reading & (don't hate me, please) but bores me. But its your story so you can include them if you want.
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Reviewed By: Samantha On: May 25, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it great plot so far.
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: May 24, 2004 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing, spectacular! Please update soon! I can't wait! AngelOfDiamonds ~Lia~
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 20:58 CDT
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You fic is aaaaaaaaawesome!! You know I never like these kind of fic, but wow THAT was something!!! Please update!!!!!!! If you don't I'll haunt ya until you die!!! (yes, exactly, it's a threaten!!) ^^
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