| "ON with the NEW and OFF with the OLD!" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu freak On: May 22, 2004 13:12 CDT
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Hey that was good but I would'nt say the ssame about your spelling...and write longer chapters too you write good lemons
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Reviewed By: Dhampir [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I appologise for my earlier review. You have cleaned it up. ^_^ I am sorry about that I just didnt like reading something in an instant message format and reading omg every other sentance. I do appologise again however.
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Reviewed By: Dhampir [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm... I have never given a bad review before but...well...the plot so far is awesome. I hope however, that you cut out the slang in later chapters. It kinda makes the story lose it's crediblity and spund a bit air heady. I don't want to be mean I'm just trying to say that maybe you should clean up the spelling and slang a bit.
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Reviewed By: christinatails [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 17:18 CDT
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Great worl! And it was about time you updated, I was starting to lose patience. Well, update soon! Time for me to eat!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT A LOT!!!! hope u make more story like this
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Title: dgirlie
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love kagome and i love yuyu...great combo of two of my fav animes...keep up the good work
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Title: *~::Me::~*
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 14:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
U liked the lemon???........ahaha i liked it...^__________________^......but this time im gonna try to write the lemon.....O and let me tell u peeeps something....there will be a 'surprise' in the next chappie.....ahaha xD....ull have to read AND review to see wat it is.....
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Reviewed By: nightspiritfox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ awsome!Youkois good at bing a pest when its comes to geting wut he wants huh...ne ways update soon!
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Title: *~::Me::~*
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 19:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
heh....i updated ^____________^ thanx for the lemon nightspiritfox ^_______^ congrats to u!!!^________^
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Reviewed By: nightspiritfox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 19:03 CDT
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....i just realized how many times u asked for help wiv a lemon...and NO ONE HELPED U!!OMG!!i feel special now,not the special like my friends i told u about but yea u kno wut i mean...U JUST KEEP TORTURING MY WIV THAT 'ill update in 10 min'STUFF!UGH!DARN MY IMAPTENCE!!GRR!ne ways...ill review again wwhen i read ur new chappie!
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Title: ME
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey every1......um i need a lemon...between Kurama and Kagome...and Youko...he'll be there in the next chappie...but I need a lemon to update....so....buhbye now
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Title: tohther intell the end
Reviewed By: bbe On: April 11, 2004 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very good so hthier and write mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Title: Hooray!
Reviewed By: christinatails [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 15:02 CDT
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I read some more! Kurama and Kagome are together! They're a cute couple! Oh, and Yukina should find someone else instead of Kuwabara. He's ugly and gross! Ugh! Oh! Time for my date with Tails! See ya! *fixes her hair and fur*
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Title: LEMON
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
REALLI??????? u can HELP ME???????? OMG OMG OMG OMG ME NEEEEEEEED A LEMON!!!!!!!!! THEN I CAN UPDATE^________________________________^
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Title: .........
Reviewed By: EternalDeath On: April 07, 2004 13:02 CDT
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beggin 4 lemony ideas eh??? i COULD help but i dunno if i wanna help. ur story is ok but it could be better.i may help you and ur situation....
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