| "ON with the NEW and OFF with the OLD!" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: blackrose8074 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i liked the first 2 or 3 chapters but then you kept on uing slang like "ur" and "baq". it's really illiterate so i recomend that you fix it. but your story'e plot an them was good. and the only reaon why i'm leaving this review was because you said you wanted one.
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Reviewed By: ladyluck13 On: June 03, 2006 21:25 CDT
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your story line is good but well. iv only read one chapter and that was the first but you seem to skip around a lot. like one momment shippo is about to cry and the next he is giggling. i mean everybody just died and he was thinking baout how everybody died. and the next second he is laughing. you need to play out the scenes more and not skip emotions to fast.
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 02:47 CDT
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as i recall this is your first fic. rather good :) lacking in some areas but good. i wish u much luck with the revision, and if you ever need help feel free to contact me :) i'm always glad to help ppl! so if ya want i'll help u beta. couldn't read the last 2 chaps, so that kinda sucks. well good luck with your story and may kami bless. ^_^ Ja ne!
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa i thought u say that there's gonna b a lot of lemons? that's only one lemon....hn, o well, w/e. anyways, make sure to write more chappies, kk?
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 18:10 CDT
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i like it it was good....will you really read my fic?(pain don't mean a thing?) thats so cool
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Title: why?
Reviewed By: yuni On: June 12, 2005 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so awesome. Please hurry up and write some more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Kagomesunni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 17:47 CST
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Well like they say If life throws you lemon make lemonade then get life back by pouring lemonade on it's eyes ^-^
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Reviewed By: kagayaku rei tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:02 CDT
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OKAY, THIS IS NOT REALLY A REVIEW, BUT I JUST WANTED TO SAY I LOOOOOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!! I UNDERSTAND HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT THE GRANDMA THING!!! I KNEW BOTH OF MY GRANDMA'S, BUT WAS CLOSER TOO MY MOM'S MOM!!!!!! POWER TO THE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!! sorry 'bout dat. T-T
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Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please
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Reviewed By: kuroiyouko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 19:00 CDT
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Hey KAGGIE!!!! aww...u're off to Japan! Imma miss you ;.; ... well, when you get back! I just want to let you know that I finished my fic "Ai Hanna" so i hope you enjoy it wen you come back! I thinkit's cheezy but, at least YOU like it!! ^^well bai! I love you!! :DDDkuroiyouko(Denice)
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Title: AUTHOR
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 19:33 CDT
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im goin away from vacation... so bye til i come baq
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Title: Kagome-chan/// author...
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 00:32 CDT
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Hey everyone...im sry.... im gonna update sometime later because im soo busy nowadays T.T SRY!!!!!!!! lol and Kagome is sad...but doesnt show it...sryyy~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: May 25, 2004 17:17 CDT
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OMG great story so far you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles
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Reviewed By: inu yuyu On: May 22, 2004 14:39 CDT
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I realy liked it but there all too happy I mean HELLO Inuyasha just died!Kags is acting like nothing happened and..Er THERE TOO HAPPY! But I still like it! keep updateing. THERE TOO HAPPY!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu freak On: May 22, 2004 14:22 CDT
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INUTASHAS DEAD!!!!!NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!NOOOOOOOOO!!!!WHY CRULE FATE HAVE YOU DONE THIS TO ME!!!!!!!!!NOOOOOOO *sobs uncontrolibly*WWWWWWAAAAAAAA!!!!!
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