| "ON with the NEW and OFF with the OLD!" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Artimis Diana Selen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok I hate to give bad reviews but I can help this one the idea is good but.....your using chat langagein the story and thats really not cool also you where really vauge on HOW kagome got truned in to a demon oh one more thing um... try to space out what your saying its easyer to read that way and you can understand it better with out getting confused
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Title: sry ppl
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
gomen gomen...ill update soon. I got it all typed up, but wen i tried to add the chappie...some of the words on the fanfic got cut off soo im trying to figure out wat to do!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 20:03 CST
Comment/Review:
i love the story so far but i think that you should make the chapters longer and spread the words out ok great story up date soon tootles
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Title: nightmareofcat
Reviewed By: nightmareofcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i liked this story but i think you should spell the whole words and space out the sentences. other than that it was good.
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Title: Parrings
Reviewed By: Gin Aibu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said this story is really good and I really want you to update soon! PLZ! Anyway about the pairings if you really want to have someone tell you what the pairings should be then you should put up a poll, and it doesn't have to be for pairings, it can be for anything you are stuck on. It did wonders for me. Anyway keep on going I'm anxious to read the next chapter. Thankx for your vote too! I still think you should try puting up a poll for about two chapters or something like that, but it's your choice, and if you're gonna put up a poll put me down Hiei/Kagome. Plz update soon. Ja Ne
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Title: SRY!! GOMEN!!!
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 18:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Im sry...everyone ill try to do the paragraph thing..i promise..juss give me a chance..PLEASE!! *gets on knees*..ne wayz..hope u all like my story sooo far
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Reviewed By: innyubabe4e [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 15:38 CST
Comment/Review:
the storys good and all but . Do you believe in paragraphs? because its hard 2 follow without them
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 17:17 CST
Comment/Review:
THANX and i really hoped that people would like it.!!^^hehe and i really dunno anything about the pairings......should it be Hiei or Kurama...please telll me!
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Reviewed By: Gin Aibu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 16:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Yo good job so far. I really liked it. I was wondering what the parrings are. Recently i've been givin a few suggestions. U can choose to ignore it or not. It really doesn't matter if u consider my ideas or not. If u are taking suggestions for parings then i would say i think that it should be Kag/Hiei. I like Kur/Kag, but it's a little overdone in my opinion. However it's not really my opinion that counts, it's urs. So i just wanted to say that this fic is really good, and plz update soon. Ja Ne
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