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| "Par Tout Autre Nom" Reviews/Comments [ 734 ] | | Pages (49): [ « ‹ 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 › » ] | Title: Gosh!
Reviewed By: momiji_mouse On: May 15, 2004 17:59 PDT
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Ack!! Surely you're not just going to leave it THERE!!! Please, please, please, next chapter! Quick!! As always, I love your writing and the fun quirks you add to each scene (Hiei stealing dessert? Kag touching Kurama? Shippou copycatting mannerisms?). PLEASE, P-L-E-A-S-E update quick!
| Title: rereading. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 16:07 PDT
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random curiousity, when is the meeting with sango and miroku gonna happen? Since it seems like a really good idea and has been basically left and forgotten. . . maybe on the mission-thing that botan dragged them off for or something? naah. . .
| Title: oooh that was
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 15:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know when I got to the last part of the chapter, I was listening to Marilyn Manson's virsion of Sweet Dreams...man it made that dramatic ending even more so. So know I'm going to jump off my balcony, so by the time I'm better the next chapter will be out.
| Reviewed By: Niku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 11:20 PDT
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Wow! What a cliffhanger!!! Ack! How mean! V_V I wonder who it is?!?!?! Hmmm, Naraku... somehow! Yeah, you go Kurama/Youko! Kill the bastard who would dare touch and frighten Kagome ^^ LOL! Hiei stole the dessert ^_^ How cute! Anyways, you better update!!! Beacause your story rocks!
| Title: NOT FAIR!!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 10:36 PDT
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That's. . . just evil. The cliffy is just evil beyond all evilness. WRITE MORE! OR I SHALL FIND YOU AND BEAT YOU WITH A BLUNT OBJECT!!!!! (err. . . we got banned from sharp objects, any guesses why?) Anyway, I still love the Hiei/Kurama/Youko conversations, and the bit about Hiei stealing the ice cream is just cool! But who was the guy that made Kagome act like that? Was it the Naraku-personage? Anyway. . . I'd better stop writing. . .
| Reviewed By: rosie13 (too hypnotized to log in.... dont ask) On: May 13, 2004 17:25 PDT
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Well, I guess I'll start this review off with the line that stuck out to me the most this chapter. I actually remember the different chapters the most because of one or two lines in the whole thing. It's weird, some scenes just stick out in my mind... Like in an earlier chapter (it was a really early one, like 2 or 3) , I specifically remember Kurama and Hiei talking on Kurama's porch and the vines bringing Kurama his cup of tea. Another line that stood out was when Yusuke was talking to Kagome in his back yard, and it was something like, 'Yusuke felt the grass shift beneath his feet, leaning him towards the house.' or something like that. I always try to get that one substantial line in all of my chapters. Usually It's the last line, but hey, whatever sticks out, sticks out. Oh yeah, the part I most remember from this chapter was when Kurama hooked his arms around Kagome, one going over her stomach and the other across her shoulders, his chin resting on her shoulder. I dunno, I guess that was the most descriptive piece in the chapter. It really made me visualize it! You know what I noticed? We take our actions for granted. Like how when you see someone doing something, you just accept it without having to explain it to anyone clearly. But when you write and envision someone doing something, you have to get the exact right words so everone understands. Thats probably one of the hardest things to do as an author(ess). I've been wondering, out of pure curiosity, when Inuyasha will come into the picture. That's the gap that I've been itching to fill this whole time. Everyone else is there, but what about Inuyasha?...Oh no, he didn't die, did he? Oh no, he can't be dead! He's like, the glue of everything! He can't be gone! Where will we get our comic relief from?!?!?... Oh wait, we still have Kurabara! Nevermind. Aaaaanyway, I'm dying to know what happened to Kagome!!!!... Well, actually no, I'm not dying, but I am suffering a long, slow, unbearable torture. (Being having to read bad fanfiction while I wait for you to move your lazy butt and tell su what happened!!!) And don't you dare say It'll all happen in good time... My head just might explode. Great update, and start workin on that new book of yours! Okay, so next time I know that the big red button does not turn on the TV. What more do you want me to say?
| Title: Kag and Kur fluff!
Reviewed By: momiji_mouse On: May 12, 2004 02:38 PDT
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Finally!! Some Kagome and Kurama fluff!! This is a great chapter, finally having them together... and I love how protective Shippou is! However I'm dying for the rest of the "real" story to unfold... I find myself speed reading through every chapter because I HAVE to know what's going to happen! Then of course I love having to re-read back to all the parts I skimmed over and discovering those lovely snippets or phrases that just seem to totally exemplify that character or situation! I adore Kurama's thoughts on wanting Kagome, and Shippou's "she was mine first!" was brilliant! Can't wait to see what happens next! Now if only you could update every day..........
| Reviewed By: Anime_gurl1989 On: May 11, 2004 16:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I absolutly love this fanfic!!!!! Your idea was awsome and I an in awe of the way that you portray each character. Please remember your loyal fans and continue to update often.
| Reviewed By: purpleppeopleeater On: May 11, 2004 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noe lets see some inuyasha parts in this. i'm dying to see his reaction to kagome's new lover after what he went through with kouga. i also want to see kouga show up and an investigation of sango and miroku. will they see kagome again? and how will the pervert reet his past wife? eh? update soon. cheers
| Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: May 11, 2004 15:10 PDT
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cool!
| Title: By Any Other Name
Reviewed By: Arella Hallo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 06:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do enjoy reading this story. It is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's as good as this one was. I'm still wondering what's wrong with Kagome, thoguh.
| Reviewed By: a_r On: May 11, 2004 02:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!!! that was a great chapter. I ABSOLUTELY love this story keep up the excellent work. -akuma_river
| Reviewed By: SuzumiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohohoho! Youko can get Kagome! ^-^v I loved the idea that you made the 'fight' with Sess and Kurama a test. I love that you made this very comedic and fluffy. Keep on typing! You always find a great way to show the kindness in every character. I love this whole story and this chapter is one of the best ever! (like the part where he licked her hand... hehe...) I absolutely love this fic. ^-^
| Title: I don't know . . .
Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: May 10, 2004 21:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, you've got me on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what's going to happen next. But at the same time, I don't know about Kurama. I like him and all, and really like the pairing (next to sess/kag) but I think I would really like to see Kag kick his a@# and put him in his place and let him know that she isn't a game...but as you seem to have said, your characters have developed a mind of their own.... oh well. but a I still think Kurama needs to be set straight! JA
| Reviewed By: momiji_mouse On: May 07, 2004 23:39 PDT
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Great chapter... and very funny!! Go Kurama! I love the Hiei/Youko arguments and Kagome punching Kurama! A very funny chapter! And does this mean that Kurama and Kagome will have to endure (snigger) chaperoned dates???? I can't wait for the return of Onigumo.... but I do hope that you're not setting the scene for an Inuyasha/Kikyo style betrayl! Kag's had enough to endure -- all out war would be better! And will Kurama be meeting Kouga anytime soon? I can't wait for that one, and if Kouga has a son it would be just like him to push his son's suit for Kagome! But no matter, I love the way the plot is going and all the twists and turns you bring to the story. Can't wait for an update!
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