|
| "Par Tout Autre Nom" Reviews/Comments [ 734 ] | | Pages (49): [ « ‹ 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 › » ] | Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: May 07, 2004 20:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwww, you really like my babble? Even when I don't say crap about your story? Awwww thats so sweet!!! I feel loved... You know what? I've been saying that alot lately, wether being serious or not. It's like, my most sarcastic remark. (weird, aint it?) well, enough about me. More about you, the all-might goddess or writing!!! (and Kurama, of course) Okay so I'm gonna insert my fav part this time, becuase it just made me crack up sooooooooo much. (thankfully my bro was wearing earphones and blasting the sound WAY high at the time...) `The best years of my human childhood wasted on a heartless, abusive boyfriend-` If you don't knock that off, I swear I'm going to kill you where you stand,'he cut him off before Youko could get anymore into his little dramatic tirade. Sesshoumaru would probably consider me a godsend and offer me anything my black little heart desired, including the legend of the Shikon-no-Tama. `Cold-hearted little fucker.' Yes, and that's why you try to seduce me on a daily basis, you sick twisted freak, I just have to say that is the best goddamn excerpt EVER. I love how you make the hiei/kurama/youko confrontations both entertaining AND educational. I can see it now. You reading this story to little kids and saying, And this, children, is what we call twisted humor. Can't you just picture it in your head? You know, I've realized that I am a very visual person. Whenever my spanish teacher tries to get me to say something in spanish, I'm like, 'Uhhhh... Can you draw a picture of it for me?' and she just stares at me like I have 3 heads. Or maybe a mirror. I swear she has the most sunken-in eyes you have ever seen. Its just plain creepy!!! Kinda reminds me of Hiei if he ever got high... Heeeeeey, that sounds like a good idea!!! You cna use it if you wnat, i don't mind. But it sounds kinda stupid too. You know, I've found that the key to humor is deciphering between the stupid and the stupid cool. Some stuff is just plain ridiculous, whilst other things are ridiculously funny. Thankfully, you know how to make the decision. Unfortunately, I have a little bit of a hard time doing that... Eh heh heh. Maybe thats how i end up with crap chapters. Oh well. Another stupenderiffic chapter, please feed me more delicious words! Remember, whatever you do, don't touch the Big Red Butto--BAM
| Reviewed By: SuzumiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it still!!! at last! Some Kurama/Kagome fluff. Holding hands is good enough for me! I can't wait for more~!
| Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: May 05, 2004 13:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
LOL! That was a funny chapter! Keep going please ^_^ Are you going to add in some more stuff with Naraju soon?
| Reviewed By: Youkos_Rose(not loged on) On: May 05, 2004 09:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay a new chapter! I love this story!! I cant wait till the next chapter! I really hope that you update soon! I Love Yoko!!! and your story is my favorite Please please update ja ne.
| Title: BY ANY OTHER NAME
Reviewed By: lovingiris On: May 03, 2004 18:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD,WERE DID YOU GET SUCH TALENT. ANYWAY YOUR FANFIC IS TOTALY AWSOME. I LOVE IT. IT'S DAMN GOOD FUNNY, AND A LITLE MORE THAN PERVERTED. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, BUT I CAN ONLY DO IF YOU UPDATE FIRST. SO YOU DO THAT K'.THANKS!!!!!
| Title: About "By Another Name"
Reviewed By: kirby_04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 12:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic to DEATH! It's got a great story behind it, and it's possibly one of the best crossovers I've ever read. I absolute love how all the characters are in character; it makes me so much happier as a reader! Great job and I hope you keep it going to the end! As for the ratings: I love the tone in your style, as well as the dialogue and how everything flows. However, my enjoyment factor is a little lower because I find that you have a lot of description, and half the time I'm trying to find out what's going on; I skip over the nonverbals to get straight to the action half the time. Of course, this could be because you're dialogue is so well done and in character. Either way, I still love your story and will continue to read it. ^__^
| Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 21:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yusuke's going to be furious....
| Reviewed By: wyldecolt On: April 30, 2004 20:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm just being curious but... is Kuwabara going to snap out of his shock and demand answers before Kurama can say "Kagome"? I noticed that, unlike Yusuke, he is unrestrained and seems to have been forgotten.
| Title: Oh WOW!
Reviewed By: momiji_mouse On: April 27, 2004 21:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow... they finally have an "audience"! Yuusuke wants info on the jewel, but Kurama wants Kagome... who will win??? I still remain convinced... this is THE best fanfic out there! I love the Youko/Hiei arguments and poor Shippou! I can't wait for the next chapter... I'm hoping that Hiei's prediction will be right -- that Kurama will get tossed on his ass a few times for trying to get to Kagome! He thinks he can just smile and she'll fall into his plans... but Kagome has the jewel, her "sons" and not to mention a VERY protective family! I love how Hiei dismisses so many of the hints about who Kagome and Shinju are... and as for Kagome being her OWN reincarnation! Oooh!!! Each chapter just keeps getting better and I am absolutely GLUED to the screen reading... I log on every day just to see if you've updated! Again, it's such a GREAT fic!
| Reviewed By: rosie13 (you really expect me to be on NOW?) On: April 27, 2004 15:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oi, what a good chapter! It's like I can't even understand how completely cool that was! It was totally mindblowing. My brain is jelly now.... (does....not...compute) I mean like, I have to admit I originally thought that Sesshoumaru was just i his humanoid demon form... thing, (is there even a word for that?) but then I realized he was in his full demon form and that totally blowed me away! It's like seeing a god turn into the most beautiful and enchanting creature you've eer seen. (Thats the feeling I get when I think of Sesshoumaru in his demon form) And the details you included in your chapter; dammit girl!I was so engrossed that I kinda tuned out everything else around me. I didn't hear my sister talking to until she was in the middle of a conversation she thought she was having with me... eh heh heh. Maybe I should pay more attention to other things besides your story. But then again what would be the fun in that? Why derive myself of a pleasure I so fully enjoy? It's like taking away mashed potatoes with gravy!!!! (I love mashed potatoes. My fav food! Its like one of those foods I could eat for the rest of my life and not get sick of it) Anyway, back to the actual story. I think my fvaorite part was when Kurama said 'my lover'. I was saying in my head, "Oh shit... He's gonna get it." Did he really think he was gonna get away with it with everyone there??? Oi, sometimes Youko gets a little carried away. But sometime sthats good, ya know? Oooh, I think I have a prediction for upcoming chapters. I think that somehow Yusuke's kids will be put in jeapordy and he'll transform or something. (that would be cool, wouldn't it? transforming I mean) I guess they could be held for randsom if Kurama doesn't hold up his sid eof the bargain or something. By the way, I wanna tell you i am DYING to know which 'option' Kurama chooses!!! I wonder which one you'd choose if you were Kurama. I would probably go after the information... On secidn thought, I'd go after Kagome... No, wait a sec... Augh! i can't decide! Both are really important to him, and with Yusuke there I'm sure he won't choose Kagome so hastily. Also, you know how Sesshoumaru said he couldn't ask someone more than once? Does that pertain just to Kurama, or can Hiei step in...? ooh, I see possibilities!!! Remember, us readers luv ya!... But we love your writing more. ^-^ (just kidding) Update before my head blows up!
| Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (Too lazy to log in) On: April 27, 2004 14:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
Gee, we all know which option Kurama is gonna take, right? Unless something should stop him from taking it, of course. . . And why wouldn't Kagome tell him, anyway? Wait. Sesshomaru would probably order her not to tell but she doesn't listen and. . . *Think-think-think. . .* That doesn't work. Nevermind, then. Adios!
| Reviewed By: Youkos_Rose (not loged on) On: April 27, 2004 12:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! did you have to leave a cliffy? well i suppose it does add to the suspense though youre story hardly needs it! I love your story I cant truthfully say that it is my absolute favorite! I can't wait to see what happens next oh please update soon! ja ne!
| Reviewed By: SuzumiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still ove this!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
| Title: your killing me here
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 19:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooh man, how could you do that to me again. Do you enjoy reading about how you make us all squerm. Rything in agony waiting for the next chapter to come out. Though it is that kind of agony that you keep coming back to experince. I'm really looking forward to more. Thats all I've got to say this chapter. You'll hear more of my rude comments that are acttually ment to be funny...I hope there funny and not just rude.
| Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: April 26, 2004 19:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
ahh sorry about the other two (stupid computer) you know what i mean anyway i love how this is turning out can wait till the next chpater
| | Pages (49): [ « ‹ 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 › » ] |
|
|
