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Title: What the heck did Inu Yasha wish for?
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the only fan fic I've read which kept me awake when I wasn't actually reading it. Last Thursday, I quit reading about 10 'cuz, after all, I had work the next day. Couldn't get to sleep 'til like 12:30 'cuz I was fretting about Inu Yasha. If he was dead, that would be one thing but you've been awfully mysterious about his fate, though I surmise he was the guy outside of Midoriko's cave. And what is the deal with Kagome and Sesshomaru? I guess all will be revealed in the fullness of time. In Chapter 20, there were a couple of spots that seemed a bit rough."When Sesshoumaru stepped forward, Youko and Hiei moved back to clear a path instinctively" Was that supposed to be Youko or Yusuke clearing a path? It just seemed odd that Youko was clearing a path for someone stepping towards him. Or I didn't have the locations pictured correctly. "and know he knows we're showing our interest openly." I think that first know is supposed to be now. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: March 23, 2004 15:37 PST
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Okay i tink this is all I have to say. When I saw that you updated, this was the first thing that ran into my mind- HOLY FRIGGIN YES!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 00:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooh!!! How does Youko know Sesshomaru? I'm still so excited every time I read a chapter.
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Title: So good!
Reviewed By: momiji_mouse On: March 22, 2004 22:32 PST
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Wow! How the plot thickens! What a great chapter... to see Kurama and Sessy facing off like that! Sess is SO protective! When will the guys realise just what kind of power and strength Kagome has??? And is Kurama actually going to be warned off Kag... or more determined to steal her away?? I love the interaction your characters go through... the Hiei/Kurama arguments are wonderful! And even more scary... will Hojou have anything more to do with the story???? Please, please, please keep updating... it's such a great read!!!!
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Title: The one wit the verbal showdown
Reviewed By: Kuroi Tenshi (too lazy to sign in as usu.) On: March 22, 2004 20:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have died and gone to heaven. Can i marry you? Because that way i can read your stories b4 anyone else. I was surprised that this came out so soon and i 'specially loved the last bit with Youko/Sesshoumaru. And surprise! I learned a new word. Every1 gasp now. At first i thought you meant aviator and avator was some weird english word. You know like civilisation and colour. Talk about strange. But then i thought why would you use something involving planes in that context so i had to look it up. Another round of gasping. I lost my dictionary and the one i found didn't have the a section so i used my handy dandy internet. Of course i can't carry the net around like steve from blue's clues does so its not really handy or dandy...im wandering off subject aren't i? Well thats my life story of how im building my voc. with ur story so u better update or risk me going terminally braindead. You wouldn't want that on your conscience now would you? But i can't help but wonder whatever became of SHippou and what 'trick' per se did Kurama leave for him?
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Title: Ohhhhh!!!!!!
Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: March 22, 2004 20:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can you stop there? Anyway, you have got me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter! I want to know what happens next...did I mention I want to know what exactly happened in the past? Where's Inu in all of this...I can't wait for you to update again, ...Please do it real soon! So does Kag really think of Sess as an "Uncle" type figure. Will Kurama really get the girl? Update! Update! UPdate! The Black Kat!
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Title: GemJewel
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 20:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my top ten favorite fanfics to read. U r doing a great job. Update soon because this is a really great story and i want 2 continue reading it.
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Reviewed By: a_r On: March 19, 2004 06:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Ox King On: March 18, 2004 19:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story very much. Unlike many of the crossovers I have read, I think this happens to be one of the best Inu/YYH. The characters were not OOC. I have come to despise the freqent "Sit Boy" that comes out of Kagome's mouth, or in this case, authors finding any reason to write it into the story. You spared me the misery and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Your story gave me the impression that you actualy passed English classes, unlike some other fanfiction I have read. The correlation between Kurama and Miroku was funny, and very original. A huge thing that put a big WOOT!! in the story is the fact that you actualy had more than one or two paragraphs to read. The dinky chapters in my opinion almost make me want to skip the story all together. The only part of your story that I think that needs some fixing is Sesshoumaru overprotectiveness towards Kagome and relationships.
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Reviewed By: Rosie13 (not on) On: March 18, 2004 19:30 PST
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Woot! Another terrific, spledorous, great wonderful chapter! I laughed (out loud) on more than one occasion this chapter, and that doesn't really happen that much when I'm reading other stories. I think the way you have Hiei and Kurama (and Youko) interac with each other is really amusing and well thought-out. They all seem to compliment each other very well, and always come up with the funniest insults. I'm also really liking how Kurama's being teh big flirt with kagome. Homestly, I didn't think he had it in him! But it's makin Kagome flustered and embarassed, so I guess tahts all that matters. Oh, and what did Kurama leave for Shippou? Heh heh, probably a kitsune trap or something. And won't Hiei be surprised when he finds out Shippou's older than him! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 18:07 PST
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yeah you updated, thanks i needed to read something i was getting bored
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Reviewed By: Suzumi On: March 18, 2004 11:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The enjoyment factor should go over 10... This is a REALLY GREAT AWESOME FIC! I LOVE IT! TT - TT I love everything about this fic!
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Title: GO SHIPPO, GO SHIPPO
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That absolutly was THE best chapter so far. So many good points. I loved the kiss at the begening I loved how Shippo kicked ass at the end. I can't get enough of Kurama's inner struggles. I'm so glad I'm reading this, it makes me smile every time I read a new chapter.
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Title: OOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: I hate some servers sometimes. . . On: March 13, 2004 16:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's possibly the best story I've ever read! Except for whole big real books, but definitely the best fanfic ever! EVER!!! And I wish I could write so well. Oh well, another five years of practice until I try and actually write for bread and water, ne? Or so. . . Anyway, bais! --Silver Neko ((mm.org logged me off. . .))
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Reviewed By: Lolly Pop On: March 13, 2004 11:12 PST
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The story is so kuwaii!(did i spell that rite?) o well who cares. I love your story. I cant wait 2 c wut happens nxt. so hurry and update
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