| "Chrysalis" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon_of_1000_Lands [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... I'm just wondering. Can you get Yuai and Yugi together, please? That's about it. K?
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic a lot ^^ Its very well written and it actually keeps me on the edge at all the good parts ^_^ Well, I love it and I think you should keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (NLI) On: February 17, 2004 10:48 CST
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Great!!!! another chapter.....better then what I've been able to do.... *sigh* oh well anyway, another great chapter I hope Mokuba any Yuai will get along
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Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (NLI) On: February 09, 2004 16:42 CST
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This, is hillarious, Mokuba a living nightmare? never thought of that. Another great couple of chapters, and don't worry, you can always count on reviews from me.
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Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (not logged in) On: February 02, 2004 00:35 CST
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Whoa! explosive chapter, it seems like everyone is feeling pretty uptight, but I loved how you made lil Yugi react to coffee, I can just imagine him like that, bouncing off the wall one moment, then drooling in la-la land the next, another great job!
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Title: again
Reviewed By: kristen89 (not signed in) On: January 31, 2004 17:46 CST
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It was really funny how Yugi acted on coffee! will yugi ask his girlfriend to the dance? will jou get back together with Seto? will Honda and serenity make up? please write more!
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Reviewed By: kristen89(not signed in) On: January 31, 2004 17:44 CST
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Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (not signed on) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 00:22 CST
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Wow, another good chapter.... I wish I had that kind of luck, I'm suffering from writers, block, and people are getting mad that I don't update *sigh*..... anywho, great job, I can't wait to see the next chap, Ja Ne for now -The Fanfic writing Hero of Lunar, Dragonmaster TC
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Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (not signed on) On: January 20, 2004 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another Good chapter, but I'm a bit comfused, I thought Yami wanted Yugi to hook up with Yuai? Anywho, I hope you get another chapter up soon, Ja ne for now -The Fanfic Writing Hero of Lunar, Dragonmaster TC
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Reviewed By: kristen89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 15:21 CST
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I liked how Yami is over protective and Tea/Anzu is not like she is in the show. I wanna see what happens to Yugi and his girlfriend does he find out about her? and will he still like her? please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 22:53 CST
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This is good! Biatch bashing, a cool female, yaoi, and an overprotective yami! Keep up the wonderful work!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 15:37 CST
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This story is becoming very good, I like the idea, please write the next chapter soon, I would like to know what happens to Tea/Anzu, I hope she gets what's coming to her
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