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Title: SOOOO GREAT!!
Reviewed By: Scorpion29 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I LOVED IT!!! I don't think I have ever had a more enjoyable read! This so kicked butt! You are an awesome writer! I especially loved the Seto/jou bits, they are one of my fav pairings! I just have to say you should never give up writing because you have such a talent for it and you certainly brightened up my night with it!!! I do believe there is a sequel to this that I have to read! I started reading this a long time ago, but was kicked off the computer and never had the chance to finish it. I then rediscovered it on Fanfiction and decided that I wanted to read the good version...so here I am! Well, have a nice day, night....whatever!!!
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Title: Not a Chrysalis review, but an Emergence Review! Oooh..
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 15:09 CST
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Ok, I can't review on Emergence for some weird reason, so I'm reviewing for Emergence here, since I want to get my review out. 00 Dude. No killing will ensue, since I'm nice, and you continuing this for yet another story is good. As much as the end just killed me and I wish to strangle you, I won't. So, update soon, and happy holidays. ^^
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Reviewed By: AnjiruandDuckies On: June 15, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Your fanfic is sooo good. My friend and I would have sleepovers every wekend just so we could read the new chapters of Chrysalis.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 01:01 CDT
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I read 'Rabbit Rabbit Rabbit', so I decided to read this. It's really good! I love Jo's little "performance" and I'm so glad Ekko and Yuai's parents got what they deserved. You're going to do a sequel? Yay! More Yami/Yugi goodness for all! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 14:42 CDT
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This was amazing...this is the last chapter right? I wonder how long it will take to get the other one out...but I still loved it ^_^ I'm so glad that Yuai's parents got what they deserved..and Ekko..they all will suffer!! Please update soon!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: April 18, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!I *really* *really* enjoyed this story! I especiallt love the fact that Ekko and Yuai's parents got their comeuppance....Excellent work! I can't wait for the next story. I hope the person who is trying to kill Mokuba and destroy Kaiba gets his, too. I despise people who fight dirty or involve children in their sick games. It's a testament to your excellent writing that the reader gets emotionally involved in a story. I look forward to the sequel, and I want a REALLY big lemon scene for Yami and Yugi. They are my favorite couple, after all. I can't believe it, though....I actually *like* Yuai....*smirks* Well, looking forward to the next story!
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 12:19 CDT
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Yay! I must admit that was a nice ending... A continuation? Ooo! Ryoko wants to read, Ryoko wants to read! *jumps up and down* Heh heh. Yami and Bakura make a great evil team. ^_^ And I'm glad... I hated that Ekko or whatever his name is. Anywho, I'll be waiting for the next fics!
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoooo! Awesome! This ending is great!!! Oh?! Another arc?! Eeh! That's so wonderful!!! Oh, I'll be all over it like Bakura on Ryou! Hee! I can't wait! Haha! The punishment dished out by Yami was so perfect! And how amusing that Bakura gets to do the dirty work ('cause he no doubt very much enjoys it). Heh heh. Man this fic was great. I'm printing it out to give to my internet deprived friends. Yeah, they're gonna love it! Thanks for the wonderful tale and see you in the next arc!! Ja! ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 17:48 CDT
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I can't wait! This fic was REALLY good, seriously!
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Title: *sniff*
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (Not Logged In) On: April 09, 2004 16:30 CDT
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*me and all my Muses are weeping for joy* Wonderful, just wonderful, this is so joyus, I'm glad that Yuai's folks and Ekkos got that they deserved, A penalty Game up the A$$! I hope you get the next story up soon
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Title: that was great
Reviewed By: BurnbabyBurn_woo to hot On: April 08, 2004 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a great story, u should really keep on writing . i mean if u got with the right people it could eaisly be a anime movie or show if it became longer.
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 22:12 CDT
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Whoo! You had couscous in the fic!! I love that stuff! I'm making some on Friday for RyokoMink and "mah posse." Yup. I likes it good! Heh. Mouse droppings... That's great. Ah!! Thank You! Thank You! Yay! A happy ending! Yah! Oh! You asked, and I quote, "So what do you think? What scenes do you like best in the story? What scenes just didn't work for you?" Weeeeell... I liked the descriptions! Very nice details and such. That was my favorite part. I love insightful details ^ ^. Ah! And especially inner dialogue. That's nice too. Hmm... The only thing that kinda' bothers me is the non Yugi and Yami deal. I mean, didn't Yugi tell Yami that he loved him? That he was the only one? I guess feelings change and all, but that more than slightly miffs me. Yuai is cool and all, but, Yugi and Yami belong together if you ask my opinion. Oh, and yes, all those that messed with Yuai should pay. Pay dearly. I'm very happy that Yuai's story ended well. So. You got only one chapter left? Ooh! I can't wait! Hm... It'd be kinda' cool if it's one of those "one year later" type epilogue things. So we can know what happened to everyone. That would be nice. Anywho, eitherway, I'm sure the story's going to absolutly awesome!
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Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: April 06, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I really, really love you!!!Umm..I mean, your writing. I was having a really bad day, and when I read your story, I calmed down a bit. Thanks for that! In any case, I'm glad Kaiba was able to set things right, and I'm happy Yuai forgave Yugi...Lesson? Never, ever jump into conclusions...you will make a fool of yourself. *blushing* I had to fan myself and get a fire extinguisher for the makeup scene between Jou and Seto...My computer was about to combust! *laughing* I'm looking forward to your next story...and don't make Ekko and Yuai's parents get away with anything...It's bad enough in real life....Great work, Tamlin-san!
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 21:40 CDT
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Yay! A happy ending ne? ^_^ And there was not a lot of Yugi/Yami... Yuai is such a cool character. I'm glad it ended up well. *sniffle, sniffle* It's so awesome having control over a story! I've heard that couscous is good. DugFinn-san was gonna make me some. Ah, yes the matzo balls... I've seen them before! I was walking through a store with DugFinn and we were all like, "Whoa! Matzo balls!" We were going to buy them but they were too expensive. Anywho, yay! I love this story! And I can't wait to see the Bakura/Ryou thing! Woot!
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Reviewed By: Bobble [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 19:54 CDT
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It's very good! I usually don't like OCs but Yuai is impossible to not like. There isn't much Yami/Yugi though... Are you going to add a bit more before the story ends? Is Yuai going to find out about Yami? Please??? Continue soon please!!
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