| "The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Ch 10
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 17:38 CST
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Oh, Duo that wasn't right...*smirks*...leaving Heero hanging that way. I was hoping to find out what the other thing was Duo added to the order...maybe next chapter...*smiles*! Hmmm... the perfect laptop...nice touch better than diamonds and rudies(what would he do with them anyway?} Well, I watched Pretty Woman last night...with my vivid imagation is was easy to replace Richard Gere and Julia Roberts with Duo and Heero...well for the most part...*smiles*! Looking forward to the next update...*nods head grinning like an idiot*...
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Reviewed By: water-soter On: January 09, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I soooo love this fic! VERY original, but, I'm having major problems reading from chappie 6 and up. Everytime I try to access them, they don't appear. I know it's a lot to ask, but I was wondering if you could e-mail me chappie 6 and up at wwww.water_soter@yahoo.com ? Pretty please! I REALLY want to read the rest of the chappies. Water-Soter
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 09, 2004 15:11 CST
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Tsk, tsk, tsk... bad Duo, teasing poor Heero like that! LOL! I liked this chapter. Update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 09, 2004 14:36 CST
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lol duo-1 heero-0
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 19:52 CST
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Excellent story! I couldn't stop reading well...until I reached the last chapter...*smiles*! I'm really new to the GW fandom, but I already have a love of yaoi...*drools* Heero and Duo, I think make a perfect couple. Pretty Woman is one of my favorite movies, I watch it often. It's so romantic...a true fairy tale. I've added this fic to my favorites, so I'll get an e-mail when you update...*grins*...wouldn't want to miss anything. You're doing an excellent job with this story and I can't wait to read what happens next. I'm curious about Heero's past? Suddenly I have a need go watch Pretty Woman. Waiting.................................................................... .......................
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Reviewed By: Abgek On: January 08, 2004 19:51 CST
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Need more chapters... must have more... ::falls off chair:: ::twitch twitch:: please... update soon! It is really good so far. I like that movie and never would have thought of doing something like this with it. Excellent!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 21:41 CST
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I've seen Pretty Woman numerous times, and I really like what you're doing with this fic. The influence is certainly there, but I think you have filled your story with more angst; obviously, anytime you're privy to the workings of someone's mind, you learn more than you possibly can from the cinema. I'm glad "the whore" has a brain and is able to use it. My personal plea - please let them kiss soon! It's breaking my heart!!! :( Keep up the great work, kiddo!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 07, 2004 20:15 CST
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great chapter!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 07, 2004 14:36 CST
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Great chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 07, 2004 14:36 CST
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Great chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: siti On: January 06, 2004 19:08 CST
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the pace of the story is gettin better with every new chapters, and things are are starting to get angsty between Duo and Heero. continue soon.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 06, 2004 14:50 CST
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aw that was sad
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 06, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Can't wait to read more soon. Keep up the GREAT job.
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Reviewed By: KuraiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 00:20 CST
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good story^^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 20:52 CST
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i love your story. its so good!!
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