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"The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ]
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 Reviewed By: Sol 1056  On: April 22, 2004 10:48 CDT
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Unfortunately, the drawback to updating quickly is that when Real Life (TM) comes back into action, and you slow down on posting...people get cranky. Bizarre, eh? They're willing to wait months - even YEARS - for some stories to get a single, 1000-word chapter...yet I go three days without updating Moon and I get the note, "you're updating so slow! do this faster!" I'm like, screw you. I've got three original novels, three fanfics, AND a frickin' LIFE. Hm, I think the life comes first, then the original work...hm. I find a few times I've slowed down out of spite. Don't let that happen to ya... [Duo: please! for the love of all that's holy, please, no!] ---- however, as someone still going strong on GWA's Update Wars (Mal and I are kicking CYT's ass, woo] I can completely relate. However, don't take this to mean I didn't jump on the computer and hit the damn link the SECOND the email notify arrived. Wah! Something to read over lunch! :D ---- *insert happy sounds here* ---- Man, this is WAY better than the damn movie. Right as I'm thinking, okay, she's wrapping it up, and Duo/Heero will meet on the subway or at a party and live happily ever after...you go and spring MORE plot developments and stuff on us. I know you might be getting weary of the story - happens, sometimes - but it's complex and still moving and that's just awesome from a reader's perspective. Keep it up! ;D
 Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2004 10:26 CDT
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Hey, I totally understand the long pauses between updates. Life happens. *shrugs* But, it is quite nice to see more story appearing. ^_^ But, we do not want to rush you, hon. Life first, fic later, ne? I will continue to read this lovely piece of writing for however long it takes to be finished. ^_~
 Title: Love this fic!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2004 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics, ever. I know how hard it is to write things like this, so take your time! (But all updates are eagerly greeted!!) Must admit, it's all taken an unexpected turn and I'm REALLY anxious to see D and H get back together. :-)
 Reviewed By: Sol 1056  On: April 19, 2004 23:56 CDT
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Next chapter in Tet...Duo either a) gets his heart broken, b) gets laid, or c) DIES A HORRIBLE FIERY DEATH BY VACUUM CLEANER WHILE BEING SUFFOCATED WITH GUM ERASERS IF I DON'T SEE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON! ......comeon, man, yer KILLIN' me, heah! *cackles while Duo hides*
 Title: merp!
Reviewed By: SuzumeTori  On: April 19, 2004 23:45 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I want you to write more. and i want them to get back together before i go insane. Mmmhm n_n that's all I ask.... :p wonderful fic! I don't usually read really long fics, but yours is special :p seeing as you update it all the time, which makes it worth my while (if it was one of those update-once-every-three-months deals, I would cry XD) So anyway... good work. I love Duo's angsting... especially when he realizes he doesn't even know how to spell 'Heero'... (It's actually pretty funny; I have a problem when writing essays for english about 'tragic hero's', because I automatically type Heero instead of hero.... drives me crazy. ^_^;;) I also liked the incorperation of the word 'sythe'... and of 'sanqhar' ^_^ Good job! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Lrigelbbub [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2004 09:24 CDT
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i reviewed at ffnet but i thought i'd review again here^^ This fic is beyond wicked. You have a nice style and it's easy to read - i mean that as a compliment just incase it seems like an insult ^^;; I can't wait for the next update^^ be safe -BG
 Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in)  On: April 16, 2004 23:19 CDT
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good 2 c a new chap out =D
 Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2004 20:20 CDT
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 Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2004 20:20 CDT
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whoa... he walked in on them... Gee i wonder how trowa is doing? Quat needs to get over his obssession with Heero and listen to his heart and not the lust... sigh, reading this chapter i really didn't get the feeling from Duo when he heard Quat call out Heero's name. i got the empression that he was very aroused at the sight of the two nakesexybabies, I just wonder how his heart's doing. WHOOOA is me! the tension and wanting to fond out if Duo caught anything from Heero, but the red thread would the red thread have been thinner if Duo was going to die... (crosses fingers and hopes thats not the case.) dionysus... Duo I think its a perfect combination. Ja ne and looking forward to your next update!
 Reviewed By: Flicker [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2004 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My God...it's an online novel! ^__^ You've accomplished a miracle; this is a classic, like a Lord of the Rings or Evangelion of fanfiction. And thank you for updating so much- it's wonderful not to have to wait forever for the next chapter of a good fic! ^__^
 Reviewed By: Sol 1056  On: April 16, 2004 12:10 CDT
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Awright, whew. Duo's safe. *pets Duo* For a week, and then...TROWA'S NEXT! ;D ---- awww, man, come'on, how much longer you gonna make us watch this trainwreck as Duo and Heero stumble through their days convincing themselves that they're both fine, no, really, we're FINE, no, REALLY. Heh. And nice cameo by Wufei - I see he hasn't made up his mind yet about what he knows...
 Title: snorts!
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2004 17:25 CDT
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where's the update! (feels alittle ripe sitting in her chair waiting for days for the update) just kidding... wonders when Mookie-san will update... (goes back to read last 5 chapters...whistles and falls asleep at keyboard..)
 Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2004 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Great story! I love the vocabulary and trivia notes. And I, too, am one of those who spent a day and a half reading the entire thing... (well, re-reading since I read the first 12 chappies or so back in February). *patiently waits for more*
 Title: TCB!!??!!??
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2004 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I actually spent a whole day reading this, not knowing that it wasn't done!!!! Arghhhhh! This is so good. Please more quick! :-)
 Title: TCB!!??!!??
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2004 17:57 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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