| "Unwanted" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: iron kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 12:38 PDT
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What a wonderfully written installment! Ugh, Vegeta can be such an ass... you did such a good job in portraying him ^_^. Please keep up the good work, and I hope you update again soon! Esther
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Reviewed By: mona On: July 20, 2004 21:19 PDT
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AGAIN WITH SEATING THE AUDIENCE TO THE EDGE OF THE SEAT...GREAT CHAPTER!!!:)
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Reviewed By: Jene-san On: July 20, 2004 13:21 PDT
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Damn! This story just keeps getting better and better!
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Reviewed By: Jessica1 On: July 20, 2004 07:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... i wonder what this secret Bulma is keeping is. Love your writing!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: July 19, 2004 23:44 PDT
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well that was interesting two characters that love each other but hide it in their disdain... awww... and some one kill off goku he annoys me... hee hee just joking just find chichi for him andput him in some little cabin out in the woods...
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Reviewed By: Serendy4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 21:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about a thrilling chapter! Wow, nicely done LGV! This was an excellent chapter. One that hinted to something I had a hunch on. You know about what could have happened because of V/B's first rendezvous. Then again I could be wrong - though I doubt it! Unwanted gets better with each new plot development and getting worthy of being called one of the best V/b fics ever! You never cease to amaze me girl, keep up the great writing which has made me such a big fan of yours. 'till next time...
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Reviewed By: bulma75(not logged in! why cant it just log me in automatically???I never remember my pw) On: July 19, 2004 18:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omG...you evil, evil, EVIL person! Lol this is torture...when will they just cave already?? GRR get rid of kakarot....and now whats this intriguing secret? I think I have a reasonable guess but Im not sure....so update SOON before the suspense drives me mad! With that said, another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kikyo7089 On: July 19, 2004 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was great. I liked the ending very much. Please update soon!!!
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: crazyhelga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 14:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! I loved it! Hmm, I wonder what Bulma's little secret is. I could only imagine what's going through your brilliant mind for this story. I don't want Bulma and Vegeta to get their marrage annuled... *sniff* *sniff* Well, I hope to see another chapter soon! Peace! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga
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Reviewed By: Caralin Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...my heart-rate accelerated and I actually stopped breathing when Vegeta grabbed Bulma for that kiss. Talk about sexy!!! As for the little secret Bulma has been hiding? I can only guess that a little Trunks was created that fateful night. But how (if I am right) could she live so long apart from her child? My heart broke while my son was summer camp and that was only for a week! Awesome...awesome chapter! I want more kissing action between the two, if only to subdue the nasty gossip casued by Kakarot's return. Caralin
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 19, 2004 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man what's the secret....BABY well i'll read it soon...oh i knoe that they have feelings for one another. why can't they just say it....and goku come on i know he and chichi well like i said i'll read it...lol please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: me On: July 08, 2004 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: July 04, 2004 05:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma, she has a lot of soul searching to do, doesn't she? Her confusion is heart breakin, but so is Vegeta's frustration. I have a feeling that Goku isn't all that he seems. I'm looking forward to seeing what happend next!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 17:35 PDT
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Well, just read all of this one in one sitting. That was quite a lot of delicious torment for one afternoon! Highly gripping fic! Now I've got this longing in my gut for another chapter--I *love* that feeling. It's almost as intense as the worst infantile pining for Vegeta this otaku has every conjured! Thanks for the fic!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 16:06 PDT
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What a great chapter! You make V and B suffer like no one else--and I love you for it! I can't wait to discover Kakarrot's secret--it's a doozy, I'm sure. Patiently waiting for the next update, LisaB
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