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Reviewed By: mona On: February 01, 2004 04:10 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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in the Enjoyment Factor i would give more than ten like 20+... this is like the best chapter i ever read... you have great talent in writing... keep it up.
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Reviewed By: spini On: February 01, 2004 02:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow! I´m so excited! Can´t wait for the next chapter!
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Title: YAAAY
Reviewed By: SakuraOSX On: January 31, 2004 18:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
?!!! What the heck?!! Ahh....what a an amazing web you weave!! I SO know Gokou is gonna turn up alive, but I guess that cliche is bettered by this turnabout concerning Veggie saying he would *again* demand Bulma's hand....THAT is originality!! I can't wait for more!
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: Bulma75 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo evil, lol I cant believe you left chapter 2 like that. lol and it was also evil to leave the flashback incompleted like that! So cruel. Lol, anyway, still lovin' the story, update soon B) -Bulma75
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 08:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE ME LOVEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! AS ALWAYS UR WORK IS GENIUS!!!!!!! HURRY IM DYING!!!! LATER!
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Reviewed By: spini On: January 24, 2004 08:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey can´t wait for Bulma and Vegetas relationship to blossom so please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: milk_girl On: January 14, 2004 19:48 PST
Comment/Review:
good start, puh-leeeseee no more bulma and raditz!!! its so awful, and no more bulma the inocent virgin that is so out, but your work is great
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Reviewed By: saiyanchick On: January 12, 2004 23:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur work it's so original keep it up.This is a great story i can't wait till u update
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Reviewed By: mona On: January 11, 2004 05:36 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you know a thought this won't come out as good as i thought it will... you know with the whole goku/bulma thing but it did and i love it. i absolutely love and enjoyed reading it... please update ASAP.
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Title: EEP! YAYZ!
Reviewed By: SakuraOSX On: January 10, 2004 19:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, glad to see a new ficcy from you! And it started out very juicily! I can't wait to see how the Vegeta/Bulma relationship evolves...I hope Kakkarot's body is found, I'd rather him not reappear, hehe. Just Veggie and Bulma....ooh but there's always Turles eh? The look-alike who was never even related to Kakkarot....And what about Raditz? ^_^
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Title: great start!
Reviewed By: blue dragon (not logged in) On: January 10, 2004 15:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great story to add to your amazing work. Keep it up, this looks promising! ^_^ ~Blue Dragon~
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