| "Unwanted" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 09:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was another wonderful chapter!! Please hurry! The suspense is killing me!
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Reviewed By: Solafide [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 15:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes! Goku is alive! Chi-chi is in the picture! I'm happy! Continue, I'm on the edge of my seat!
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Reviewed By: spini On: March 15, 2004 05:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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what? Goku isn´t dead? Wow, you always surprise me! lol Finally, the night is complete! Yay. love it. Write more!
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Reviewed By: Bulma75 (as usual, too lazy to log in) On: March 14, 2004 14:31 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Omg! What an awesomly amazing (couldnt decide which word to use :o, lol) twist in the story!! Not only is he alive, but he's lost his memory! Now I really cant wait to see what happens...will he remember her? What will her reaction be? lol what does the future hold?? Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon!!! Dyin' here, lol. ^_~
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 20:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was astounding! A very good chapter. I can't wait to see as the story progresses. I love it! Keep on going!
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Reviewed By: spini On: March 10, 2004 04:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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love it love it!!
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Reviewed By: Solafide [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 17:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing! Please continue to write, I'm completely entralled.
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Reviewed By: mona On: March 07, 2004 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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wow...please... please... please update... i want to know what happened next. AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BogusRed On: March 07, 2004 11:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I hate you for that cliffhanger but I still love you for being you. I want more damnit! No fair! This is such a beautiful fic. Write more soon! There is nothing I can think of that would make it better.
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 29, 2004 17:12 PST
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please update asap... i keep coming to this story and you haven't updated it yet please please hurry i can't wait what will happen next...
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 19:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, this is a freaking awesome story!! I just started reading it and I fell in love. I can't wait for your next cahpter. Please hurry!!!!
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Reviewed By: spini On: February 18, 2004 10:54 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey another great chapter! You´re so brilliant! Hurry up! lol
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Reviewed By: Phena On: February 17, 2004 17:21 PST
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Why is Vegeta so sensitive in this fic. Some may find it sweet. I guess he must be in love with her but I don't understand why he is stressing out himself so much over one person. is not like she is God.
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Title: Unwanted, Ch. 3
Reviewed By: Bulma75 (lol not logged in) On: February 17, 2004 11:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter in the midst of what's sure to be another amazing fic ^-^ Update soon
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Reviewed By: nona On: February 01, 2004 13:21 PST
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Awesome story so far! I think I have inkling as to what happened 5 years ago but I'm more interested in the next B/V encounter. Update sooN!
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