| "To be so close, and yet so far away" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: To be so close, yet so far away
Reviewed By: sakuraali On: April 08, 2004 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fanfic, but there was some grammar mistakes in the story. (Sorry-I don't know why, but I notice stuff like that!) Overall, I really liked the story. When Piper's mom hit her, for some strange reason, I almost cried. (It's usually hard to make me cry by reading "sad stories"...) Anyways, keep up the good work! Write more-pleasse!
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Title: Chapter 4 coming Soon!!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 20:20 CST
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Sorry everyone! I've been really busy but chapter 4 is alomst done!
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 16:50 CST
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Sorry but I'll have to update later this week. If not this week then definately(sp?)the beginning of next week.
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Title: Coming soon!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 09:01 CST
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Chappie 2 is coming either today or tomorrow! :)
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Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 15:16 CST
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Shout YES!!!!!! if you like my story.
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 15:46 CST
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Yes, Kara-chan is Karasu. See, 'Kara' is the first part of his name, and 'chan' is a Japanese suffix that is used for small children and/or close friends, boyfriends, girlfriends, etc. Thus, 'Kara-chan'! Poor Kara-chan...UPDATE SOON!! Please. OR ELSE I WILL SIC THE PIRATE FROM HELL ON YOU!! *Dark-Sparrow.*
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Title: Hmmmmm
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 15:28 CST
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I'm writing chapter number 4 but if you all want, you could give me ideas. It's okay if ya don't.
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Title: Response..
Reviewed By: Desire69all4u [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH I AM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Desire69all4u [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 18:25 CST
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Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 16:32 CST
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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 22:09 CST
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How is everyone doing? Is everyone having fun or enjoing reading my story?
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:23 CST
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I loved the chapter. ^_^ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:02 CST
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Thanks for teh deidcation. 8.8 I feel so loved...In a friendship sorta way. Kara-chan would like to add that you're lucky to have loving, caring parents. He doesn't. His mother was killed when he was...What was it...Oh yeah, nine *which is RIDICULOUSLY young for a demon* and his father is...Cruel. Poor Kara-chan...His fathe rhits him, beats him, tortures him whenever he wants...But that's off the subject. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 16:48 CST
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far. ^__________^ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON~~~Later, the phox
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