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| "Simple and Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] | | Pages (5): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 > » ] | Title: Review
Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: February 20, 2005 00:11 CST
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I love the chappies! PLEASE update soon!! I wasn't able to review for your last chappy cause something is either screwy with my computer, not likely though, or MediaMiner that it doesn't show in the list the chappy you updated so I couldn't read it. I don't know if I have saidthis before or not but...your a great writer!! it would mean alot to me if you would read my story here. My Pen Name is kittencutie14 so if you would check it out it would de so cool to have one of my favorite authors to read my storyand maybe even review it!! Anyway, like I said, please update really really REALLY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Review
Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: January 28, 2005 20:53 CST
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Oh My God thhis is such an awsome story so please update really, really, REALLY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Esha aka Kouga_Lover_3056 (forgot to sign in) On: January 23, 2005 21:08 CST
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Awesome chapters! I was totally captivated by them and they were pretty long!^_^ Keep up the good work, you're an awesome author! (unlike me)... Anyways update as soon as you can!:D Sayonara
| Reviewed By: evil person who's actually reviewing On: January 23, 2005 18:51 CST
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okkkaaaayyyyy... I thought the chapter was short (the last one... actually, this one too)... Anywho, Sabriel is a girl that looks like a guy... not visa versa. It really isn't that boring so far, but I only read the first couple chapters... Alright, now I must admit I'm confused! Darn metaphors a puzzling phrases! "And you Miroku, to truly defeat the darkness in your heart, you must find what you left behind. Kouga, nothing is set in stone. Fear a change of heart, and you will be trapped in your own fleeting feelings." GAH!!! It's evil! I can't understand it! ::runs around in circles:: To many metaphors!!! On the other hand, A-ok chappy, I hope you update soon and yadda-yadda-yadda...
| Title: Hey I have fuzzy triangles of doom too!
Reviewed By: The evil person who doesn't review On: January 22, 2005 18:29 CST
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That was sort of short. I actually didn't skip over everything this time. Whhooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaa... it's a miracle. Anywho, I liked the smell o' vision! Yay smell o' vision! That was sort f weird though cause I eventually got totally lost because of it. And yes, you are right, FTD do eat your ears!!! I know. I've seen it. (I just had coke, which explains my hyperness) I'm not quite sure I like how this is going with the enter of the Kikyo. That looks bbbbaaaaaaaaaaddddd... like, running away from a sewer aligator in a haunted mansion bad. There will be blood by my mocha botlle! You will all be redeemed! Sabriel is really a guy! (Am I creeping you out yet?) Okay, this is proof I should never have diet coke again. I'll call you and read this review to you! BUAHAHAHAHAHAA!!! There is no escape! Oh, yeah, and I hope you review.
| Reviewed By: TwilightZone [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeease update soon!! great story, i really wanna find out what happens to inuyasha and kagome ^_^ and no more cliffies. . .they are evil!
| Reviewed By: Burning_Phoenix On: December 08, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a true pleasure to read. I ask that you please continue the story since you leave us at a cliff hanger. Please please please go on I really want to see how this turns out.^^ I am a big Inuyasha fan and once I figure out how to send my fics in then you can read something I've typed. Anyways please write more soon I really wanna know what happens next. Keep up the good fic writing. And please... NO MORE CLIFF HANGERS I HATE THEM!!!!
| Title: It's a review!! Aren't you thrilled beyond all possible relief???!!!
Reviewed By: Agent Fuzz On: December 07, 2004 22:52 CST
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So, as I mentioned on the phone, I see all different points of view when looking at a story.... I was picturing Kikyo in a "DARE" shirt when I read that. Even though it doesn't fit the contex (really, really drepressing) I still thought it was hysterically funny imagining Kikyo in a dare shirt, digging through Inuyasha's pack ridding him of his pills, while he is babbling on about "But I need my pills because apparently I'm not paying attention in school because I have attetion disofficer- disofficer- attention deficit disorder- what were you saying? HI!!!!!" then Kikyo smaking him saying that he needed to get off the pills. I know, I'm a bad person, but I tend to think of funny jokes for sad things... Anyway, good job and the depressing chapter and I only wish that it was longer and filled with Sesshomaru-Rin-Jaken comedy. (God, I love that....)
| Reviewed By: Kouga_lover_3056 -forgot to sign in- On: December 04, 2004 20:22 CST
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Thank you, thank you! I remember now! *pats physcho_bitch on head* I totally know how stressful it is to update with so many things going on... I barley have time to updat my fics either! I have school, homework, synchronized swimming, yoga, friends, and chores! Update as soon as you can! I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH!^.^
| Reviewed By: Kouga_Lover_3056 - forgot to sign-in On: November 28, 2004 04:07 CST
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this is an awesome story, but could you please, please, update faster?! I've completely forgotten the WHOLE story and I do not understand why Inuyasha is so sad... but I do love the story! Sometimes its better to have shorter chapters, but updated faster it keeps people coming and it helps them not forget the earlier chapters... anyways I gotta go, luv your fic!^.^
| Reviewed By: Auroras-flame On: November 28, 2004 01:37 CST
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Okay, I have to be truthful, I skipped through most of the Kohaku scene and I glanced at the "save me" scene. Way to pathetically depressing (not your writing, but the plot I feel I need to skip) what caught me was the Sesshomaru bit. i actually laughed out loud at some parts. I love how Rin gets him coffee! ^^ Mmmmmmm... coffeee..... excuse me, my refrigerator is calling me. ^^
| Title: awww
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 15:31 CST
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update soon please great story..thankies^-^
| Reviewed By: Leiko_Kane [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update alot...this is a great story.
| Reviewed By: Auroras-flame On: October 26, 2004 17:23 CDT
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Huh? What? ::looks around curiously:: I never saw anything about Kohaku. How confusing. Well, sorry I didn't review or read your story immediately, but I know I was about to since the first thing that I sqaw when I turned the screen to my computer back on was the page for your story. Heh, sorry! I like it, I sort of read through it quickly, but I got all of the info down. Actually, the event with Nathaniel was much more irritating. At least Inuyasha doesn't whine and fake cry. Grrrrrr.... Yup, so anyway, good chap, I still need to read the ones on fanfiction.net... meh.
| Reviewed By: Auroras-flame On: September 12, 2004 22:49 CDT
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You're right. That was depressing. ::Points finger harshly only to start "tapping you pointedly":: SHAME ON YOU KILLER OF ALL THINGS FLUFFY!!!!! Okay, I'm done. It was cool. Nicely written. You framed Kagome just as you always do- an emotional volcano who's jelous of Kikyo. This isn't a bad thing- because let's face it: it's true. Anywho, remember to review my fic or I will be forced to tap you pointedly again. Hope you have enough bag space for tommorow! ^^ Buh, bye.
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