| "Rivers of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Title: You really need to up date this thing sooner!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty (I'm not logged in) On: January 31, 2004 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS THING SOONER!!!!!! Man you make this sooo sneaky!!! I love it!! I really hope that Kag and Inu get together SOON!!! Kikyo is just one big B!#@&!!!! Sorry I really think that she needs to get a life or just die already!!! I really hate her!!! Well talk to you next update, later!!!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Inu Youkai_ Dog Demond On: January 29, 2004 19:28 CST
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Your story's kick, this story Kicks, great start to what im sure will be a great story. Please keep righing, U ROCK
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Reviewed By: ME On: January 29, 2004 14:24 CST
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Love your story so far--I'm not usually into the whole 'soap opera/love triangle' thing, but you have it so well written--I understand the attraction b/w Inu and Kag, its not just lust, and the Sesshie/Rin/Kagura thing--now thats just juicy^_^--of course Rin will eventually breakdown Sesshie!! the fun is watching it happen. Now, as far as the ending goes--I vote for the 'happy' ending--I mean Inu and Kag were meant to be together--even in the manga I don't see Inu 'going to hell' with Kikyou--which would be your version of 'Inu sticking it out with Kikyou'--so ....happy endings all around with Inu and Kag together as well as Rin and Sesshie!!! update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: January 28, 2004 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals* I absolutely love it! Can't wait till you write more! I know what's wrong with Kikyou! *bounces up and down* Aunt went through the same thing...except she wanted her husband there with her..hmm anyways!!
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Title: ah my wrist it hurts
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 07:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn good'n, looking forward to more. I think I have an Idea about what happened to Kikyo.
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Title: Questions for Chapter one
Reviewed By: MysticalNami13 On: January 28, 2004 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! But I have some questions about Chapter One... Questions for chapter One (Sorry if you already answered these, I'm posting them as I finish a chapter) 1)What kind of companies are Tessiga co/ Tensaiga Inc? 2)Lol, Kagome is married to Hojo but dating Koga? 3)You had Rin saying that Sesshomaru is only 2 years older than both Kagome and Inuyasha... But Inuyasha (18) is 3 years older than Kagome (15) in the series.
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 01:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful and interesting story :) I can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 01:29 CST
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I personally like the triangle you have going here..and you are leaving me wondering about certain things, like why kikyou wants to go back to the hospital to work and why mir/san haven't visited..and left me wishing to read the experiences of sess cracking to his feelings for rin and OF COURSE inuyasha and kagome. i think u chose a good setting for the story and kept everyone pretty in character (which at least for me makes it easier to digest). oh yes and the social business party..when you get to that i hope we have some inu/kouga banterings! i think i'm rambling..it's late at night. I'm just saying i like it a lot so far, i like the anticipation and hints and am very ready to read what else enfolds. Thanks!
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Title: Update as soon as u can
Reviewed By: CaribMiko03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really want to see how these relationships unfold!! And what is wrong with Kikyou? Update as soon as u can PLZ!! I love all ur stories. U r really a talented writer.
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 20:04 CST
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Inu/Kag! INU/KAG! *nod nod* It's a tradition! I haven't read the chapter yet... just wanted to nag you about something: Go update 'From Friendship to Love' *pushes* Go, hurry. I'll go review again when I finally read this.
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Reviewed By: Mimiko! On: January 23, 2004 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I love this! I want more. I hope you decide to continue it...and *cough* Inu-Yasha and Kagome! *cough* ^^; Anyhow, great story, and I can't wait for more!
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Title: this was great
Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 17:43 CST
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This was great. i bet i know what is wrong with kikyo. Greatr work and i can't wait for the next chapter. also, hurry up with the next chapter to from friendship to love. i am dying here waiting for it to come out. Then quickly put up the sequel. i hope this becomes an inuyasha/ Kagome fic because they make a great couple.
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened during the surgery or whatever the results were?! Love triangles huh? Well I always seem to find those interesting. Poor Kag, Poor Inu. Update soon.
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Title: Love!!!
Reviewed By: Pkat On: January 23, 2004 10:57 CST
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I love this story, keep it up!! I hope you are able to update more often than once a month, but I understand if you aren't.. :) It's a great story and I can't help but be anxious about how it will come together.
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 07:11 CST
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I love it, I really love it! The plot is original and intriguing and you've got a great writing-style... I hope this will be an Inu/kag, it's the best pairing ever... PLease keep writing!
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