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| "Orion Rickter's Pokemon Journey" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Pretty good!
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've gotta watch the spelling and a few grammar points, but other then that it was really enjoyable. I'm super happy for Orion, a Vulpix! Vulpix, Growlithe, Flarion and Vaporeon are my faves (I guess I'm a sucker for the doggies... and fire. Fire good.) I'm really looking foreward to seeing more of Josh and Orion's adventures. Keep it up! P.s. R&R my fic, tell me what cha' think!
| Reviewed By: Snow_Bunnie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! >I wanna be a gym leader now< Um, I hope you find time ot update it! Go Orion! BEEP!
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Dude, it's really good! Haven't I reviewed this before? Hey dude, could you R&R my fics? I'd be grateful..Keep up the good work! This is really interesting! UPDATE SOON DUDE!!
| Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good with the battle and all. Good strategy. ^^ Go Orion! Go, go, go Orion! Well, anyho, it was good. And, wow, the gym leader dude had a Ryhorn! O.O It was funny when Orion went 'BEEP!' ^^ Can't wait 'till you upload the next chapter! Upload soon.
| Title: Heya!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay so far. Needs a little more Pokemon battles. Of course, that'll be in the next chapter! ^_^ Maybe make up some evil guy, like Team Rocket. But please don't use Jessie and James! They're killing me! Just have fun with it! Well, is Orion going to go up against Ash, Misty and Gary?? I kinda feel sorry for him if he does. Well, upload the next chapter soon! ^____^
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