| "On a Wing & a Prayer" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: KeishaBit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 16:10 CDT
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i would love to read the sequal : keishabit@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: The Deeper Blues On: November 23, 2004 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story really kept my attention throughout the whole story. I deeply enjoyed it and I enjoyed the plot. I found it quite intruiging how Gina almost didn't end up with Sesshoumaru, although in the end she did, which was what I was rooting for =D Wasn't loving the little part with Naraku connected. He always seems to be there with and bad character. There were a few spelling errors, but they were simple typing mistakes, not a big thing though. If you have other works posted here, I'll be interested to read them. Ja matta ne
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Reviewed By: archangelofdeath On: September 25, 2004 22:08 CDT
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this is a great story, even though you may want to check out some of the chapters orders
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Title: I LOVED this story!!!!!!
Reviewed By: KanolaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this whole story! I am really looking forward to reading the sequel~by the way my e-mail is nec3490@yahoo.com~please e-mail me when you make the sequel~thanks ^_^
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Title: hey I liked the last chapter
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 15:22 CST
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I liked the last chapter and you struck some emotion with that but the chapters begging from 16 and up...there's like three of them repeating or so. I assume this kind of thing happens. Look forward to the sequel
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Reviewed By: Totally_Bad On: March 26, 2004 12:48 CST
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I totally don't get your story. Chapter 17 and 18 is the same as Chapter 20. It's all messed up and doesn't make sense. Maybe that's why you don't have lots of reviews. Story's not bad.
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Reviewed By: nightingail of the forest On: March 12, 2004 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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like that was one awsome fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wow i crying. that was anawsome fic!!!!!!!!please write more fics for me
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: SoulHunterJa9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 15:19 CST
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You skipped a chapter! You uploaded one of the chapters twice...
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Title: I just don't know why...
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 22:38 CST
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I just don't know why you don't get more reviews honestly. Your story is completely original. I like these two chapters that you posted. Keep up the good work. I hope you enjoy writing them as much as I enjoy reading them...the chapters.
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Title: Nice visual
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 21:57 CST
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I had a good visual of Kyoko laughing at what she said about Gina in my head. Yea, I was really under the impression that you were done. Seesh! Anyway, I'm glad you're not done. That story couldn't end like that.
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Title: I really enjoyed it!
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 22:30 CST
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I sat here in this chair of mine, and read the whole thing without any bored moments. I commend you for writing a fic where Sesshomaru takes interest in a human girl. Yes, I probably read this through at first because I am a fan of Sesshomaru, but when reading it I had to see what happens next. I am aware that it's hard to get reviews on this thing so...you definately need to write another one like this. I enjoyed it very much so!
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 07:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it hurry hurry please
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Reviewed By: hanyougirl On: February 19, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! CONTINUE THE D*** STORY ALL READY! please. ^-^
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