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Title: Divine
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that had been a nice spontaneous vacation, Mrs Higurashi thought cheerfully as she unloaded her bags in the kitchen. It had been nice to get away from the house for a change. Being an unemployed widow and stuck at home all day was enough to make anyone a manic depressant… add on a daughter who was never home and hanging out with only god knew what kind of mob and coming home periodically with the odd blood stain on her clothes. Add on another child who was going around his school telling everyone that his sister's boyfriend was a demon - and getting various letters home that were questioning her child's sanity, and an eccentric father who just - wouldn't - move - out! You won\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t believe how much this paragraph had me laughing. It\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s so far out but I actually believe her mom thinks that way. Your sense of humor is awesome and your lemons are great too. I absolutely love all the cliche lemon scenarios. And the way they got together is very realistic, awkward but sweet. This is one of those stories I will probably read over and over again.
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Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! This is such an awesome story! I had kinda forgotten what this story was about, but Ch's 9 and 10 refreshed my memory quite well. Hot scenes, and damn if Kagome isn't frustrating ME, and I'm a girl. ^_^ I hope you keep updating frequently! Lovely story!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahahah. A cat nip high. *lol* That was funny. Anyway, glad to see an update. I really like this story.
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Title: More chapter ten
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 11:26 CDT
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"The fortune - she read my fortune and it was came true!" (Hits typo with mace) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Inuyasha crouched down before him. 'What have you done?' she asked with mounting dread." Did Kagome or Inuyasha crouch down?
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Title: Chapter Ten
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 10:13 CDT
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(This review is being transferred here from ff.net so that it will not be lost when they delete Divine again those jerks.) "Actually, it looked more like a heap of snow with a pair of pale rocks for ears and two angry looks twigs for eyebrows." (snorklesnorklesnorkle) "wraith like soul catcher" Wraithlike or wraith-like. "So the rumors about the bone-eater's well is true?" rumors are true SON OF A HOLY CRUDDIN' FREAKING HECK AND A HALF IN A HAT!! Hoo boy. Tell me that Inuyasha was NOT stupid enough to return Kikyo's advances. Well, it's looking like at least he's not stupid enough to keep it a secret from Kagome for long. Whew! What a relief. Of course, I doubt either one of them will feel that way if it turns out that Kagome's lost her powers and they need to bring Kikyo on as a contractor. (snorklesnorklesnorkle) Hoo hoo... Miroku can't get any lovin'!
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Title: Chapter Nine
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 10:10 CDT
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(This review is being transferred to the safety of mediaminer so that it will not be lost when ff.net deletes this NC-17 jewel again those jerks.) I can't help but notice that Kagome's fears still don't include, "What about my powers?" Are you going to go backwards through all the scenarios with the will of fate reversed? Hee hee!! "It was better than I could ever have imagined." He told her earnestly. "When I entered you - it was fantastic. It felt so right and so perfect that I realized you were right - it was a big deal." Telling her: Good move on his part. Kagome's hesitation: Honest, but not necessarily wise. Dun dun dun!!
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Reviewed By: FuzzyWolf2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. One of the best I've ever read. Keep up the incredible work. Cannot wait for the next installment.......(hoping there will be a next installment).
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Reviewed By: Skiddy16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA! That last chapter was hilarious. I loved how your placing the charcters throughout the story. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i need to tell you this... i love you. your work is.... amazing! ah, and it's filled with so much humor, well, atleast for me... please continue!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 19:18 CDT
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Ooohh... Her clock isn't fast, is it? Hooo crud... Silly Kagome, just tell Inuyasha and then maybe it won't be so bad. He'll be mad that you were holding him off for that reason...
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Title: Mneh he he he ....
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Spotted you again ... mneh he he he he ! *0.0* Well well well. I already told you I loved your work, didn't I ? Well, I'm telling it again. I won't go and give you advices... Because advices always sucks... So I'm just going to wait for the next chapter, and trust you. Take you time, I'll be patiently waiting. *Looks like a cat who spotted a bowl of cream* Anyway... I love how you work with your story, and I'll just let you go on with this! And don't bother about ppl saying that, by sleeping with IY, Kagome lost her powers. Japanese and Occidental people don't share the same point about this... Japanese are not that prudish that they need to come up with false threat to prevent any physical relationship. Erm, excuse my strange Eng*r*ish... 0.0 Still learning, lol. Anyway , cheers for you my sweet ! And go on with the great job ! Kiri.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 22:44 CDT
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Wow, what a great chapter! Thanks for the update because I've really been watching for it. Poor Inuyasha! Oh the irony! He now thinks sex is a big deal and now Kagome is starting to think that maybe it isn't! You sure write a great story and I hope you update again soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: dogboy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story the last chapter was the so funny like how kagome got screwed 2 times in 7 hours with how she found out the it was from thusday instead of monday. the miroku one will have laughing for weeks even in my sleep
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 15:32 CDT
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Oh.Sucks to be Kagome doesn't it? Well not really because she had sex with Inuyasha but whatever....great chapter update soon.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O WOW!! Thats gotta suck! I absolutely love this story! I couldn't help but feel bad for InuYasha and his "frustrating" situations; however, this chapter really envoked all different types of feelings in me: pity for Inu, relief when they finaly gave in, and anxiety when Ayumi explained the reading! Please update soon....the cliffy is going to be the death of me!
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