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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 09:36 CDT
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Poor, poor Kagome.. lol.. /snicker/ there are always technicalities.. (spelling, i dunno). Anywho, good job! Waiting for the next installment ~ caliko
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 00:42 CDT
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Wow. So only after they did the deed did the snow clear up. Well one consequence that we all know of, is of Inu Yasha and his promise to Kikyou and how this screw it all up. Naraku may try use this to his advantage. But I don't think even demons can tell the difference between a virgin or not based on smell and blood alone. After all, its only a hymen that is what makes a virgin a virgin based on the stuff in middle ages. So how is Inu going to act with Kagome? And what about Kouga? So many things that cause so many problems. Love the story keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Quickening [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is just...wow. lol I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to the next chapter. I have to say I'm cheering for Kagome 100%, because I agree with her and Inuyasha is just coming off as a complete...well...guy. He's so eager to get under her skirt he doesn't appear to be even TRYING to see her point of view about the whole thing. Just goes to prove how very differently guys and girls see things. Girls are all about the romance and the first time being special with the one they love and guys...well...most guys will gladly do anyone in a skirt. Whether they love her or not. And forget anything romantic. @_@ Seems like Inuyasha can't tell the difference between casual sex and real love, but I hope he learns...for his own sake. And I REALLY hope Kagome doesn't cave in to his demands because that would just make her look really weak-willed, and we all know that Kagome is anything but weak.
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Title: fight!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i kno that u kno that the only reason couples fight is to have make up sex!!!!!!! lol .................i kno InuYasha seems to think that way!!! ^_^ keep up the good work update again!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 22:55 CDT
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Damn. What a chapter. What a drama. What is keeping her back? What fear is holding her back? Is she afraid it is going to be a wham bam thank you mam kind of thing? Doesn't she know they love each other. She is of a decent age. Her mom knows about them and them being off all the time it is a given that something might happen. So what the hell is she waiting for? There is no bed of roses and poetry being read by candlelight... Sigh... Oh well love the story. Keep up the excellente work.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 22:34 CDT
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Ah..so close yet so far don't ya think? Anyway great chapter update soon.
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome you make the parents proud that you have control...You make some of the kids that hold their virginity in the same regard as you do...But then again you're making us angry...Simply because Inuyasha has no idea what the boys of nowadays do. He said he wouldn't hurt ya girl...What's your problem your letting it all go to your head and you shouldn't.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 21:41 CDT
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Thanks for another great chapter! Please keep updating frequently. I really like this story and I hope you get Inuyasha and Kagome to come together happily in the end.
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooo good i hope u update soon with more! ^_^ InuYasha is just tryin so hard it's funny .................. well anyway keep up the good work and update update update !!! good fics like this need to be updated!!!! ur such a good writer!!! ^_^
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: Happylama2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is FANTASTIC. Really. Funny, witty, and true. A friend of mine once said,\"Sex is so much more and so much less than you think it will be.\" And all the different cliche scenarios had me laughing at a my computer like an idiot. Just great!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 15:46 CDT
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When they finally do it-_-will it be doggie-style,missionary,or dominatrix(woman on top) will they become mates and will it end up on tuestday(so she there wont be any accidental Knock up). l8r foxylilraven
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Title: mediaminer.org won't let me log in...=.=
Reviewed By: blue sakuras [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 23:50 CDT
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Woot! Another update! yay! I have to say, you keep killing the lemon that seems like it's trying to surface...love the tension!!!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 22:29 CDT
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Poor Inuyasha. I think that he's really trying to give Kagome what she wants, and that he really does love her. But he's getting frustrated because Kagome doesn't know how to see that he has what she wants. (all that in a non-perverted way)/////////////// Really great story. Keep up the good work! ^___^
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 22:19 CDT
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Oooo, almost... Poor Inuyasha. Please update soon because I like this fic. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 21:46 CDT
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Great chapter! So funny! Please update soon.
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