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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 10:47 CDT
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I salute you, genius of the tease! I thought Miroku's ironic success was hilarious, more recently. And poor poor Inuyasha, all hard up and no chance of nookie. And on an anylitical note, I wonder if it's the condom that's causing the loss of Kagome's abilities...? I've seen that kind of thing before in fics...
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Reviewed By: Koniko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 01:10 CDT
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Great story lol I'm truely curious if Kagome did loose her powers or not, hummm but I loved the seduction parts those were too funny especially Mirokus failed atempt LOL and you really had me going with Kagomes mom Dang I was suprized! But the cough cough love afair between Kaede and Inuyasha is priceless lol great job hope to see more
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Title: Let's Sexy Parodying!
Reviewed By: Pinku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I don't think I've ever come across any fanfic that's been both sexy and hilarious. Though reading through lots of this made me mysteriously want to high-five... SOMEbody, I wanted to cheer the most the first time I read "The Blanket Scenario."
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Title: : knock knock :
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 12:00 CST
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Okay woman, it's been over a year. What's the deal?
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Title: CONTINUE!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARA KAMI ONIGAI! Continue I must know what happens ONIGAI! Lady Kagome may Kami bless you...
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Title: Two Words: Update More
Reviewed By: The Muse [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't give rave reviews as a rule. Just an FYI. First, I adore the ironic humor that you have laced throughout the fic. Some of the hijinks you use are fairly common and as such not terribly innovative, but your writing style puts a fresh perspective on the classics. And while I doubt we'll ever see a Jaken-double ask Inuyasha for his penis on the series, you have done a marvelous job keeping our beloved travelers in character. Also? Bless you for knowing how to initiate a spell check. My gratitude abounds. A few notes on the criticism end of the spectrum: I do not believe a miko in the 1500s would consider sex to be a meaningless act, and yet Kikyou seems to hold this to be true. Additionally, why would Kikyou then offer herself to Inuyasha if she thinks that she'll lose her powers? I can understand if she was just messing with Inu's mind, but it's an issue that needs resolution. Second, Inuyasha would have some grasp of what love is. If nothing else, he felt it for his mother. Granted, it's a different love (to use the more accurate Greek terms, it's storge vs. eros), but the basics would be there. I believe the Japanese have more than one word for love as well, but I'm unsure of what they are. I just know you would never say "Aishiteru" to your sister unless you are in the Angel Sanctuary series. Last, it's nice that someone finally remembered that the age of consent in Japan is 13. Not every country has the 'wisdom' that the states possess.
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Title: OML! That is awesome.
Reviewed By: weyrdkat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading what is posted so far of this story. It was very entertaining and easy to delve into, just what I needed in the midst of bronchitis and four papers. But, it\\\'s not finished, and I know the site says to check under another screen name, but that name didn\\\'t come up either. Did you finish it, or was it just set aside? I would love to know the true repercussions and why Sango seems like, or is, not a virgin. . .Keep up the great work. Ashli
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 01:18 CST
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update for heavens sake! i've been looking through this site for any good hentai stories, and i cant find any!! To be honest, this is the best hentaish story i have ever stumbled upon. God, just please, please, please update. I'm horny. and perverted... just update.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 12:05 CST
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I just read through the whole story. I love it! I added it to my favs and I can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 20:49 CST
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wow, I can't believe her mom reacted like that! O.O She's so cool! My mom would be oh soooooo angry... And I agree with Ithilwen, tampons can get rid of the hymen without sex! Let's hope it's only that... Oh else maybe Miroku would think she already had sex with someone else... and he'll be quite sad or upset or I dunno! lol anyway. that was a great chapter I hope you'll update soon!
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Title: Chapter Thirteen, Part the Second
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 11:56 CST
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I, who needs sex and babies above anyone else" ~~~ Need. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Miroku was very positive that when he'd offered Sango a seat between his legs she'd bludgeoned him to death" ~~~ Bludgeon. (Crud, I love that word. Bludgeon bludgeon bludgeon!!) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "This was no virgin that he was making love to." ~~~ Dun dun duuuuuun!! ~~~ Well, anything from tampons to riding bicycles to (perhaps) riding flying Kirara's astride can get rid of the hymen without sex, but even so I can see why Miroku's concerned.
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Title: Chapter Thirteen
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 11:55 CST
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Transferred ... ff.net .... jerks ... blah blah blah... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Mrs. Higurashi\'s relief comes off as more creepy than funny. The fact that Kagome would have no idea that her mother didn\'t share her ideas of sex as slightly degrading and virginity as very valuable implies that they never had \"the talk.\" Also, if Kagome didn\'t get these ideas from her mother then where the crud did she get them?! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That being said... ~~~ \"I wasn't even allowed to eat a banana until I was eighteen. \" ~~~ (snorklesnorklesnorklesnorkle) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ \", but he damn well hoped it was Naraku's.\" ~~~ Eh, Miroku? Have you seen episode 32? We\'re not really sure that Naraku HAS one of those. (http://web.utk.edu/~bborchar/episodes/episode32/eps32_71.jpg) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ \"Except that the condom manufacturers had renamed them recently so they were now; large, extra large, super size, and jumbo sized. A bit misleading. But at least the condom sales had shot up recently…\" ~~~ SNAAAHEHEHHAHAHAHA!! I wonder if that would work. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To be continued...
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Reviewed By: Miakoda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 10:27 CST
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Oh, so good! I absolutely love it! Eep, Sango's not a virgin? hehe, how's Miroku gonna handle that one? ^_^ I'm excited for the next chappy!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 09:18 CST
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Brillant. Just really awesome. That was great. So Sango is not a virgin? Or could it be due to the stenous activities she does, not to mention that it may have been a really one and just withered away. He best not do something stupid. Like call her a slut or ask who was her first time. Cause if he is wrong, then she will hurt him for him thinking she was easy. And if he is right. She will hurt him cause she don't think he need to know that. So many ways for Miroku to get physically hurt. That weapon of hers has to hurt.
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 10:54 CST
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oooh, busted.... please continue! i love this story, it's so funny! ^_^ you're a really good author! What are the repurcussions? not finishing their sexcapades?? iono.
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