| "Go No Konoha" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Title: ratings!!
Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh! and my ratings!
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 22:12 EDT
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like omg!! this is the best naruto fan fic i have ever read in in while!!^_^me is so happy!! i luv the idea on how you made them a group! i mean the justsu gang!^^and i like how naruto-chan- is hidin his true powers or so you say!^^ can wai ttill he beats the crap out of someone in front of his teamates!and i cant wait to see what happens in the exams (if you put them in of course) i hope the justsu gang dont end up fightin each other in the exam:'( but then again it would be awsome to see who wins!^^ and especially to see everyones faces !^^have i metioned i luv this story? well because...i do luv this story!^^just to let you know of course!^^ this story is sooo going on my favorites and you are goin under favorites authors as well!^^ you should feel honored for i only have 3 people under favo authors!^____^feel honored if you like but i wont really care because you dont have to because its not like im royal or famouse!^^so you really dont have to feel honored! kk?kk!wow! for some reason i feel that i should keep writing! but about what?hmmmmmm...oh yeah! that scene with naruto in the shdows and when sakura saw him was really cool because she saw all of his emotions hes been holdin in!and i like how his eyes turn red when he does sertin things!^^i really like this story!^^so could you please update?of course you will!^^ you have alot of people who like this fan fic and i know you will up date>:(cause you better!^^oh! and i also cant wait to see who the parings are gonna b |
Title: zerotolerance revieuw part 2
Reviewed By: Zerotolerance On: October 14, 2004 15:07 EDT
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Take revenge on them.And you'll let the five of them go along.
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Reviewed By: Zerotolerance On: October 14, 2004 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME story,MORE updates LONGER chapters.Hey check this out instead of making them master a lot of bloodlines make them combine three blood lines in one for example,kyuubi's eyes,sharingan and byakugan and you'll have slitted red eyes with FOUR dots the fourth dot representing the byakugan,you could for example see a jutsu and they master it instantly only they won't have to do hand seals.But you make guys out there that are 10 times better than them.And instead of tsukiyomi they'll have (i read this in a fic ones)the ability hell wich makes their minds go to a hell world where they're tortured by demons and you'll have nine levels like in a real hell.Or you could make up different abilities the eyes will have.I think it would be cool if you added Ranma 1/2 to your story say he was tricked by the NWC and they try to send him to hell but they fuck up as usual and send him to Naruto world as a 12 year old (that's the age they are at beginning of the anime wright) where he joins the jutsu gang and in return he offers to teach them about the Anything Goes school of Martial arts and he teaches them of the uses of Ki (body energy),i think it would be cool if you make thwm learn elemental ki,basically turning you Ki into one of the elements (ice,fire,wind,lightning etc. etc. Later on you could make the Nerima wrecking crew find out that Ranma wasn't really send to hell and they want to go to the Naruto world to try kill him.Or you could make him 'temporarily'go back by a jutsu and |
Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: DrakeDragon On: October 03, 2004 22:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a kick ass story. i like it, but try to keep the charicters more themselfs. It would kick ass if naruto got a few more blood limit. but have them a little bit more hard to learn. otherwise cool ass fanfic
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Title: Review: Jutsu Gang
Reviewed By: stormraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story! First encountered it on ff.net and it was a great read. Just, you haven't updated in a while. You left off at a good cliffhanger, and I'm sure other people are wanting to read more as much as me. I haven't encountered any other fic that has the same premise as you, and I read A LOT of fics. Hope to see more soon, Stormraven
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Reviewed By: kage_no_tenshi On: September 09, 2004 01:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, great job. I really like this fanfic, you seem to have done wonderfully. (Okay, so I admit it. I'm a sucker for stories where Naruto's not the idiot he makes everyone believe he is.)I'm going to keep an eye on this one, considering that I'd be the idiot to let this one go and not make sure I can find it again. Meh... please update! XD Well... whenever you have time. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shinyu On: September 01, 2004 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic, and i'm telling you likr you asked to put chaps 3-6 up :P
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Title: [i]The[/i] Doku
Reviewed By: Doku_Himora On: August 29, 2004 01:12 EDT
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Overall I thought it was pretty good, you made all the characters way cool and slightly out of charicter mainly Naruto, but you also made some of the other strong characters seem weak like Kakashi. One thing that was slightly annoying to me is that you spelled Jounin, Junin though i'm not positive it is actully spelled Jounin cause Inane spells it Juunin O.o who knows. I also think you should explain your how Naruto and the gang learn the Bloodline techs. Not much is known about them in the first place but it would seem like they're called "Bloodline" because they're passed throught the blood.. maybe i'm wrong but eh. Anyway keep up the exelent work and if you could as a request from me (like that matters ~.~) could you get either Itachi or Gaara in the story? And maybe kill off unwanted characters in a mission or something coughsasukecough
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Shadow On: August 25, 2004 20:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is great plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: kurai_kodoku On: August 25, 2004 19:33 EDT
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Browsing mm.org and wow...Yay!! An update to your rewrite... Though there are some mistakes. "Slumping slightly Naruto still felt the energy continue to poor out of him." It's pour...not poor. And throughout the fic you spelt ramen as raman...It's ramen... I like the part where Naruto states it's not working as a team that is not the problem but his team is the problem. I have to agree since I really don't like Sasuke and Sakura that much. I still like the scene with the shadows and Naruto's true emotions shown in his eyes. Glad you still have it in there. Huh, One part I read..."It's almost scary to think of it. He smirked slightly, and started toward the..(and that's all, got cut off or something)" Besides that, once again, glad you updated. *glares* But you have a lot more to do. LoL. Well until then. Hope my review was helpful...
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 25, 2004 18:37 EDT
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looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: ruinmew On: August 16, 2004 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update,Update,Update, it rocks!!!
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Reviewed By: ruinmew On: August 15, 2004 14:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good, it puts what i could come up with to shame
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Reviewed By: Wolfstein [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 21:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue soon, this is a good story.
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