| "Go No Konoha" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Title: the leafs five
Reviewed By: vixen_uchiha_demon chlid On: April 02, 2004 13:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah you posted more it is good to see thanks for doing so. kept it up i want to see more of it soon do you post any place else would you like to post any poace else? please e-mail me if you do vixen_uchiha@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Demon Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kurai_kodoku On: April 01, 2004 22:01 EST
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Back again!! ^_^ A new chapter within a week. Interesting, so we get to see why they are trying to be strong. And I get to learn some more, I actually didn't remember much about the other villages. But wow, they have a big dream, to be the elite ninjas of the world.
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Reviewed By: Coplo On: March 26, 2004 16:21 EST
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Great chapters.
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Reviewed By: kurai_kodoku On: March 26, 2004 08:43 EST
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Good to see this fic updated. Besides a few typos, I'm liking the story. I really like the part with Sakura seeing a darker side about Naruto, and the way you described how his mask slipped back on when stepping into the light. So when do we see the other four?
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Reviewed By: liukang On: March 25, 2004 02:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo dude, when are u going to update? i like this fic very much. Please update asap.
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Reviewed By: Resshin On: March 13, 2004 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good stuff
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Reviewed By: Ryu (DokuRyu) On: March 01, 2004 02:56 EST
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Let's see five kids training together every day....that in my mind would make them strong really fast. They are are excelent ninjas and as Genins are fairly strong as is, but training to near exaution every day, would probably make them super strong. Shikamaru's a super genius,Kiba and Naruto are really Hard workers, Shino's a good fighter, and Chouji is a powerhouse who will work perfectly with Shikamaru. I don't know how far all of you are, but if you've seen the latest chapters. You know how strong they really are. Now I'm not putting these guys on that level yet, but Zabuza compared to other Junins was really a pushover... No offence to him. He's cool, but I think he would be beaten by the Leaf's five best ninjas! (potential wise)This is of course arguable An another note: I'll be updating hopefully soon. I wrote the second chapter, read it over a realized is was terrible. It had so little detail... I'll be rewriting it soon hopefully, but I've been extremely busy with getting my RPG done for my site, and with school. I'll work on the second chapter for a while, but it's already past midnight and I have school tomorrow... n.n don't worry soon soon, glad to see people like my story!
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Reviewed By: dtay On: February 26, 2004 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAA its really really good
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Reviewed By: Liukang On: February 21, 2004 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo dude, when are u going to udpate? i like this fic alot. Dont worry about what other people say. I say this story is awesome, but u need a background on how naruto and his gang got stronger even able to defeat a jounin. All in all, continue on the next chapter. It's been a month now.
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Reviewed By: Fat kid who eats too much On: February 02, 2004 10:02 EST
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but the way you say it is that the genins would be able to beat Zabuza when they just begin learning ninjitsu. In the series Naruto doesn't get stronger until he meets the pervert hermit. Also, you're saying that that Jonins would be easily knocked around by a bunch of kids.
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Reviewed By: Ryu (DokuRyu) On: January 30, 2004 23:11 EST
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Naturally I know that, I'm no n00b to Naruto. And Naruto as a genin is stronger than jounins in the real series. I don't see why 5 people couldn't take on Zabuza...
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Reviewed By: Ryu (DokuRyu) On: January 30, 2004 19:34 EST
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I know that, I'm no n00b to Naruto! And yes, Naruto and his gang could... they actually do lat... anyways no spoilers of the actual show...
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: Fat kid who eats too much On: January 30, 2004 19:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic doesn't make sense. Naruto and his "gang" could never beat a Jounin.
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Reviewed By: kurai_kodoku On: January 30, 2004 08:56 EST
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Did you know that the Buyakugan is a hidden bloodline, and only those who are of that bloodline (the Hyugas: Neji, Hinata) have it. But over all, I like how the story is going. Next chapter please.
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