| "some kind of bliss" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: setosgirl0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEAUtiful! You're right, it took about a small eternity for them to finally kiss, but it was beautiful when they did. I lurve your story! It's getting added to my faves right now ^_^ There need to be more PSoH fics like this. ^^
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Reviewed By: silverkitsune89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 17:18 CDT
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I can only say one thing: UPDATE!!!!!!!! Seriously, this is a really awesome story. IT's really getting interestng and I want to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: sherryillk On: June 19, 2005 05:36 CDT
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I can't say much but shall I put in a chant for an update? Please update soon, please update soon, please update soon, please update soon, please update soon, please update soon, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This is my first PSoH fanfic and you've made me falling absolutely and completely in love with it so please UPDATE SOON! It troubles me to see that it hasn't been updated since December... :(
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Title: What? No more?
Reviewed By: yellowhorde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sadly, there is no more after chapter 10. But it is my hope that there soon will be another chapter to read. I'm not going to beg or whine because I understand all to well that Real Life had a nasty habit of demanding too much of a writer's time. But I will continue to check back just in case there is something new to read. In case I didn't mention it before, this is an awesome story and I can't wait to read more. See? No begging. LOL
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Title: That KISS!
Reviewed By: yellowhorde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Leon's reaction to the kiss! And D's! I almost choked on my carrot! SO I decided it was best not to eat any more while reading this chapter and I was right because then I read Jill's when Leon told her! You should put a 'no eatting or drinking' warning on this one. *^-^* And when Leon kissed D again! :swoon: Oh how sweet!
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Title: On Ch. 6
Reviewed By: yellowhorde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly an awesome fic! You have the characters down pat and the conversations are so real, I feel like I'm reading the manga. And your descriptions paint the picture in my mind so beautifully. I just finished Chapter 6 and my God! I can't wait to read the next chapter. All in all, a WONDERFUL story!
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Reviewed By: The Grim Spectre of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 08:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you planning to continue this? I loved it.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! An update. It's really kind of funny to read how totally awkwards both D & Leon are acting now that they've kissed. Here's hoping everything works out.
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Reviewed By: Banance [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Because you asked so nicely, I'm reviewing. Actually, even if you didn't ask i would review. I'm completely in love with this fic, and I really can't wait for the next chapter. I can just see the look on Jill's face when Leon tells her that not only did he kiss D again, but he slept with him... XD Anyways, I will be waiting patiently for the next chapter.... Okay, so not to patiently, but still... update soon? Please-ums? For moi? ^.^
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: FallenAngel'sWings On: August 15, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great JOb!!! I loved it!! The writing was just amazing. The story line touching. But you were so cruel making us wait so long to see some touching. Its only true that absence makes the heart grow fonder. Well keep up the good work or I'll have to find you and beat you with a wet noodle!
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Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 18:48 CDT
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I love it! I love it alot! Leon's tenderness toward D is so touching and so real, a true portrayal of why these two are absolutely perfect for each other. Can't wait for what awaits. D has many secrets and it'll be fascinating to see how what happens between him and Leon. Lovely work. Thank you for continuing to write!
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Reviewed By: Ithilelda [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 18:59 CDT
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Wow, I've gotta say that the way you've developed this story is fabulous. I absolutely loved the new chapter. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Jexia6 On: August 08, 2004 15:37 CDT
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I visited Mediaminer last night, looked to see if your story had been updated and sighed with disappointment. What a difference a day makes. Yes, it was a lovely surprise to see the new chapter and even lovelier to read it. You have laid the groundwork of the intimacy carefully, and I must confess I can barely wait to know what comes next or who.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea! They've kissed. But now what's poor D going to do, in love with a mortal, that his father knows about?
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please update this fic! I really want to find out what is going to happen, and right now I am on pins and needles waiting for an update. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
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