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Title: Heart breaking
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a heart breaking chapter, Ototou-san. I didn't see that coming... not Ren stealing Karama's ki and using it against him to replace him as Botan's lifemate. That was a dirty trick. I am curious though... if he stole his powers, how did Karama manage to change into Youko at the last moment and avoid the dragons bite? That was aa bit confusing. I liked it, but it was a bit confusion. I have been reading your blog lately... you sound depressed. I have been absent from the world of the living myself for nigh on 3 months. I'm so sorry you are not at your best. Be that as it may... you are in my thoughts daily, koishii-tou-san. My prayers are always with you. Aishiteru, your ni-san
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Reviewed By: stix On: October 03, 2005 19:25 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: October 02, 2005 16:35 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 19, 2005 15:55 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 19, 2005 15:55 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 05, 2005 18:55 CDT
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please add more to this story soon please i loved it.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 18, 2005 21:23 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great please add more to this story soon.
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Title: plz keep writing
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: February 03, 2005 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz keep writin lol im gettin impatient lol plz i wanna kno wat happens next update soon :) Wrigzz
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Title: aghhhh
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: December 06, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aghhhhhhhh damn y do u gotta quit at such a great point please continue this story is so freackin awesome i wanna to read this fight o man its not fair please continue soon aghhhhhh plz ne way i really liked the date i thought it sounded like what a date between yukina and kuwabara would be like. ne way ya plz continure soon im lookin forward to Hiei kicken sum shinobi ass
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: November 08, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry it took so long to review end of markin period and unfortuanelty end of football :( , but o well. ne way o man, its gettin suspenseful i cant wait to see the fight seens for the next chapter. i cant wait for another update please keep writing.
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Title: Oh, my...
Reviewed By: Spooky-dono On: October 29, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I will try to translate this comment with a translator's help. I hope you can understand me. ^_^ I loved the chapter. And I hate Ren. ¬_¬ I am very anxious to see how will behis confrontation with Kurama. I have hopes that him (the fox) and Botan can have a happy end. They suffered so much... And me also, I should say. ^_^;;; Please, continue soon. I will wait eagerly. =D
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 20:52 CDT
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hm.. random observation. Yoh seems alot like seaman... you rock, this is such an awesome fic! ^_^ -kerina
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Title: Fantástico!
Reviewed By: Spooky-dono On: October 19, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Não tenho palavras. Maravilhoso esse fanfic. Sofro mais a cada capítulo e não consigo parar de ler. Adoro os vilões, adoro a interação Kurama/Botan, adoro as cenas hilárias do Kuwabara e Yusuke brigando, especialmente adorei como colocou o Reikai, com toda uma estrutura que não conhecemos no anime. Perfeito, ainda estou no capítulo 24, mas adorei tudo. ^__^ Spooky Ps. Desculpe escrever em português. Não domino muito bem o inglês e achei que seria melhor escrever algo em meu idioma que não escrever nada. ^^ Continue!!
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: September 28, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice dude i love the suspense. I hope u get another chapter out soon i love this story so much. O btw i would like a happy ending im sappy like that but o well. Plz write the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: wrigzz On: September 01, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo dude sorry i couldnt review sooner i have been busy lately cuza football camp but i can finally review, ne way... another great chapter and im sure the kuwabara yukina date will b funny thanx for xplainin the stuff of the war sounds good :). cant wait to see(/read w/e) whoever kurama fights. plz keep writin i love this story. thanx ~wrigzz
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