| "After the Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 20:52 CDT
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hm.. random observation. Yoh seems alot like seaman... you rock, this is such an awesome fic! ^_^ -kerina
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Title: Fantástico!
Reviewed By: Spooky-dono On: October 19, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Não tenho palavras. Maravilhoso esse fanfic. Sofro mais a cada capítulo e não consigo parar de ler. Adoro os vilões, adoro a interação Kurama/Botan, adoro as cenas hilárias do Kuwabara e Yusuke brigando, especialmente adorei como colocou o Reikai, com toda uma estrutura que não conhecemos no anime. Perfeito, ainda estou no capítulo 24, mas adorei tudo. ^__^ Spooky Ps. Desculpe escrever em português. Não domino muito bem o inglês e achei que seria melhor escrever algo em meu idioma que não escrever nada. ^^ Continue!!
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: September 28, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice dude i love the suspense. I hope u get another chapter out soon i love this story so much. O btw i would like a happy ending im sappy like that but o well. Plz write the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: wrigzz On: September 01, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo dude sorry i couldnt review sooner i have been busy lately cuza football camp but i can finally review, ne way... another great chapter and im sure the kuwabara yukina date will b funny thanx for xplainin the stuff of the war sounds good :). cant wait to see(/read w/e) whoever kurama fights. plz keep writin i love this story. thanx ~wrigzz
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: July 31, 2004 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo man another amazing chapter. This is definately gettin good. Btw i kno how u feel trust me. my dad left b4 i was born. (which definately sucks :(. and to make it better my mom decides to make herself feel better by becoming an alchoholic. My life sucks sumtimes, I mean everyones does. I see where your comin from tho. Wish ure bro a happy b-day for me. Plz keep writing when ever you get the chance and trust me shit gets better, i kno. Great chap plz keep writing.
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Reviewed By: ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is one of the best I've ever read, even better than alot of published books I've read! I have to agree w/ kerina about the people getting the most reviews all write really junk stories, hillarious, but the writting isn't a fraction as good as yours. Alot of people are just too lazy to review *cough*me*cough* so its okay if you don't get alot and the people who get all the reviews all seem to review eachothers stories which is part of the reason they get so many reviews. I love this story! and I never liked Botan+Kurama befor I read his either!!!
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Reviewed By: ellamoony [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 00:09 CDT
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Reviewed By: ellamoony [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was awesome i love how every one thinks kurama is cold hearted and are suprised when he comes quickly to the aid of his friends and his quote "i can't believe i once thought of love as a waste of time" it was so cute, please update soon, you are an awesome author and truly talented and gifted person! don't ever put yourself down! on ff.net you have 550+ reviews, that many people think you are good please don't disappoint them, they're all expecting you to finish your fic. we all support you all the way! heck you can compete with the best professional writers out there! especially in romance categories! i wonder if you've ever considered that, it's a very likely possiblity! well good bye for now and please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: -kerina On: July 25, 2004 00:51 CDT
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listen, you are way to hard on your self. you are an awesome author. its just the thirty-something chapters that i think scares people off. the authors that seem to get the most reveiws are the crappy, stupid 5 year olds who can hardly write. the ones who make them and their freinds on a talk show called bash kwabara for example. you are an AWESOME author. you are descriptive and vivid, your characters are very true to the story, your new characters are life-like, your attacks are very real, you rock. you rock like elizabeth haydon. (she wrote rhapsody) you are an awesome author. i am currently writing a fanfic, and it is nothing in comparison to yours. your fanfiction is by far the best written fanfic i have read. i will admit, i like some better, but mainly because i am horibly in love with yu yu hakusho/inuyasha kagome/kurama fics. your fanfics rock. your lack of reviews are simply because not alot of people seem to enjoy botan-kurama fics. (from my point of veiw) not because you dont write well. you are an awesome writer. belive me, i have been reading books for as long as i can remember. i would rate you up there with jrr tolkien and elizabeth haydon, and all those other authors. i hope your life improves and gets better, and i am sorry for the short crappy please finish reveiws i left. but hey, dont be discouraged by the number of reviews. (my grand total is one.)i really hope you continue writing, if not on mediaminer. i will pray for you. God bless you. -kerina.
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: July 07, 2004 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn this is definately the best story i have ever read plz update as soon as u can. I hope when u r done u will write more stories. Plz upedate soon :)
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Reviewed By: -kerina once again On: June 06, 2004 21:59 CDT
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HEY! you cant give up on it! T_T if you do want to stop writing, atleast make an ending, who cares if its tacky just FINISH! -the jaganashi
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Reviewed By: kandb4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. i luv it. by far the best one ive ever read. keep it goin
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Marin M [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank You!! Plz write more!
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Reviewed By: Orlilover On: April 14, 2004 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I recently read your fanfic, and I loved it. It is by far the best fanfic I've ever read. I was on the computer for hours at a time just to finish your story. Keep up on the story, I can't wait to read the rest of it.I'm thinking of printing it up so I can keep it and read when ever I want. The way you write is extrodinary, your style is unique and the characters profiles are exactly they're supposed to be. Great work!!!!!
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Reviewed By: JaganshiG87 On: April 11, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definitely need to continue writing to continue this story. You say your muse is almost dead but I wouldn't be able to tell from your writing. This story is excellent and I can't wait until you add on more chapters. You definitely have a good grasp of all the personality traits of the YYH characters, so this fanfic reads like a story that could actually happen within the anime/manga. Again, I'm definitely encouraging you to keep adding on to this story - it's too good for you to let it die.
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