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Title: update soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BloodForbiddenVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please add more soon and Sesshomaru is how u spell his name
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Title: advice. and praise
Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your plot, but your moving a bit to fast with your dialog it's short and choppy, their isn't any flow. you also need to work on your description's of surrounding's. I'm not to good at description's of surrounding's either but what i do to try to get better is go outside and 'people watch' or 'nature watch' and then write what i see. have fun writing for me it is a great past time that i would never give up. ps. I'm being lazy with my spelling and grammar right now. smiles
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz write more you cant leave us hanging like that so plz write more that story is so AWESOME
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to post soon that story is amazing i cant waite to read more keep up the good work : )
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Reviewed By: foxgirl94 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Animeotakubara [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 19:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Please post soon
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Reviewed By: moonscout11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 07:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was awsum! except for the slatering of the family, but still!
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens with Naraku, how they take care of Inuyasha, and what the rest of the gang does.
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Title: Fox Demons
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Fox Demons
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 14:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 19:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey this is a great story i love it you have got toupdate it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi people! Um, Rebekuka and Rin here again.../Rin:Jesse-chan is...writing other things?/Yeah, soon you'll see Wolf's Rain stuff...I apologize personally for Jesse's laziness. I have currently...forgotten...? Her password, or I would take down the author's note. But she likes to be on ff.net more often now, so look for her there soon. As soon as I talk to her at school, I will hound her to give links for yous. Okay?/Rin:Hai!/Not you!/Rin:Oh...Gomen...
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Reviewed By: aru-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you hurry and get it posted for her?? this is a really good story! please post really soon!!
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Reviewed By: fox3290 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 18:30 CDT
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write more please please please if yyou don't have more within a weeks time i'm coming after you as soon as i find out where you live that going to be pretty hard though with all the people in this world.
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
upy datey
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