| "Fox Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 19:07 CST
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Jess, they won'y give you a detention, unless if you talk back when they tell you put it away. I learned that the hard way. No more secspence(sp?), but I'm still gonna kill you! You colud have told while the sub was making us fall asleep. And yell. . .()
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Title: REVIEW! REVIEW! REVIEW!
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 23:49 CST
Comment/Review:
GOODNESS ME!!!!!! I JUST HAVE TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER HURRY WRITE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Please, please, please update soon!!!!! I love your story. But how can a SILVER kitsune be BLACK?
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the new chapter! just update soon ok! :)
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv it! Plz Update!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, and I have to resend you that Kurama/Kagome picture, don't I?*wink, wink*
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 15:58 CST
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*Sits quietly Inu-style*............*silence*.......I READ IT NOW JESS! NOW TYPE LIKE THE WIND! and yes, I cannot spell kitensue, so DAMARE! *Serena**Rebecca*
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Reviewed By: Sessy-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
hmm.. sounds good update soon!
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Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 19:51 CST
Comment/Review:
That was alright, I guess. But you have a LOT of spelling mistakes. I'm not criticizing you. I'm just telling you so you can choose if you want to work on that or not.
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Title: Author
Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 11:45 CST
Comment/Review:
The only reason the words run together is because my spacebar dosen't work half the time :) sorry i'll check the typing more often
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Reviewed By: black kaze Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good. the idea is pretty cliched but i love IY/YYH x-overs! ^^... specially w/ YOuko in it... this is now going to be wat i hope is consturctive critism so... yea... the spelling and grammer needs a little work, a bit scrunced, and it kinda seems to me that u made her too strong in a short 2 yr period... just a bit too. and it lacks a bit of detail...tis is just MY oppinion but wat do i kno? i have said this just to try and help if possible so do not take this offending in any way.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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very good except u have lots of typing mistakes! i love the story its just u really need to re-write the chapters. it gets confusing with the words all running together. please re-read it and update soon!
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Reviewed By: lanllnems [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! it's me again, lanllnems. here's a little advice. maybe you could double read/check your story before you put it up? or get someone to edit it for you. don't get me wrong here, it's still a great story so update soon. it's just if you fix the grammar and spelling it will help the readers understand more what's happening in the story. Hope you have fun in Florida!^_^ If you need any help, i'll be glad to help you in the future of more chapter!
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!! I LOVE IT!! IT'S OFUDA SCROLLS IF YA WANNA KNOW. IT DOSENT REALLY MATTER THOUGH!! ANYWAY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!JA NE!!
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Reviewed By: lanllnems [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll say you did a good job on this story. You should definitely continue! Keep up the good job!^_^ um... a little favor? can you write more in a chapter, i find it a little rather short.
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