| "Fox Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 00:15 CDT
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Hell yes MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE THIS IS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVERY READED IN MY LIFE. UPDATE VERY VERY VERY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON.
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Reviewed By: kitsunekagome23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue.
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHERE IS RIN AND INU AND KIKYOU ALREADY DAMMIT! *curses in Japanese* Rin: Rin wants Jessica-chan to throw rock at Jaken-sama!*picks up rock* NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! *takes rock and runs off, Rin following*
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 11:42 CDT
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......*tear in eye* DAMN YOU JESS! You already told me the sequal idea, but I want to read it! Poor Kurama...*sniff* WHY DID YOU KILL KAGOME'S FAMILY! YOU MORON! MAKING ME LOOK SO STUPID! Naraku...Becky says hello, and what did ignore us for!? BAKA
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! KITSUNES!!!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just gave you 5 new reviews...And this is the 6th one this 10 minutes.....*continues running*HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
*come back*My mistake, Hoppy is now Bun,Bun, like my Rin,Rin! Sessho-Maru:HEY! *screams and is chased off*
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:35 CDT
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*DAMN YOU INTERNET! Bunnies....NOT IVORY AND HOPPY AND PEPPER!* *Rin:*nods* Throw rock at Jaken-sama.* *You heard her!*throws rock off screen and we hear Jaken fall and Fluffy grunt** *Rin/Rebecca:*screams and runs off as Sessho-Maru looks around the screen, rubbing the side of his head, and Jaken is thrashig about, sporting a large lump on the side of his head*
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
'Now I'm signed in.....O.o
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now I'm signed in.....O.o
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Reviewed By: Rebecca (too lazy to sign in ~ $ ~) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
YES!!!!!!!!!!!.....YOU SAID INU-YASHA AND KIKYOU WERE IN THIS ONE! And how about form now on you send me the story so I can put through my word processor for you, k? AND WHERE THE HELL IS RIN! HOW DARE YOU NOT PUT IN MY RIN,RIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE JESS! YOU HAD BEETER PUT IN MY RIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *coughs* *silence**crickets chirp**crosses legs and looks around*What!*huffs and walks off to learn more Japanese words on a Japanese learning site, Rin running up to behind her*......
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Reviewed By: Kisa Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 03:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great. Please update soon. Wonder when they will get the hearts from Naraku? Aslo wonder if Naraku would figure out, if not found out about Kagura's betray before he sees either kagome/Yoko? What happens when she returns to her own time? Hmmmmm. Please, please, update real soon.
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Reviewed By: Kasia Matsubishi (im a member just not signed in right now to lazy) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay i believe this is a good fic it was a bit shaky the first two chapters lots of spelling mistakes and im asking what happend to kurama? i mean he is supposed to be shuuichi.....how did he suddenly become youko (thats how you spell it not yoko) second i do not believe that youko would give up his past so eagerly even if he does like kagome but other than that i do believe this very good for your first try but try proofreading your chaps before you upload them it really helps~~~~~luv, bishis, and sprite remixed -kasia matsubishi
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Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Not fair leaving it where you did. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next. Especially with Naraku since his plan backfired.
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 20:11 CST
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*growls*Jess.....
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