| "Cruel Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: lyn On: November 15, 2004 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhh,what a cliffhanger!i liked this last chapter,and i'm happy that u updated,i was starting to think u wouldnt!i know i'm annoying,but please updat soon,i cant wait to read what happened to naoe! luv,lyn
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Title: masterpiece!! with the sex part.. ho ho ho
Reviewed By: lovelywhiteseven On: November 05, 2004 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was like a masterpiece! it's been a while seen I've enjoyed a fanfic this much. plz update soon. I'll die in my mind if u dun continue...
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: October 30, 2004 14:25 CDT
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Oh, wow, you sure know how to leave a person in suspense,don't you?!?!?!?!?!? Its great to see you posting more chapters for this fic. Thanks for the good job you're doing with the storyline. There just aren't enough fanfics on the Net to do the crew from M.o.B. justice. If you write it then I will definitely read it. YYYAAAAHHH!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: wilyfox34 (floretta) On: October 27, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it appears the action has just intensified. Finally a peek into the nastsy agenda of Kousaka. I found it entertaining when Takaya was threatening Kou. Wow! The way you write you can feel how much Yuzura hates Naoe. The hints of Minako was inspired makes you wonder if Kou will reveal more or at least force answers from Naoe. The ending left me anxious. Will Naoe be okay? Now I am so looking forward to the next update. Lots of action and quite the enjoyable chapter. I loved every moment of it. Update soon because my heart breaks for Takaya. He needs to know that Naoe is okay and so do I. This story is one of the best that I have read.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Banshee Puppet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 06:19 CDT
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ah, you've made my day. i woke up to find a new chapter of this story. hah. well, i can't complain about untimely updates though, because I'm just as bad. Keep up the good work! Hee. Chiaki amuses me. And such a cliffy! Poor Naoe. I anxiously await future chapters. Cheers and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: LC On: September 23, 2004 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmh,i was wondering....since this is fiction and all that....so u can do what u want....ehhhh... CAN U JUST KILL YUZURU??!?!? i'm amazed,u actually made me hate yuzuru!wow!congratulations!=P please update soon!! LC
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Reviewed By: lyn On: July 26, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic,and i think it's getting better with each new chapter,at first i thought that the guys were a little out of character,but it seems that the more u write,the more u get to know them better. i loved this last chapter (although chap 6 was.....omg...),your writing was particularly beautiful.so keep on going like this.luv,lyn
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Title: Cruel Paradise
Reviewed By: me On: July 20, 2004 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reluctant to give full marks until I've gone over it again. Anyway, thank you for this fic! I was beginning to wonder if I would ever find a good 'they get together' scene in a fic. It's hard enough finding Mirage of Blaze fanfiction as it is.
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Reviewed By: Nk On: July 13, 2004 06:20 CDT
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OK, I am of course thrilled to see this finally posted and am very much looking forward to more! I adore how you write this pair, and am intrigued by the apperance of Kousaka (who wouldn't be, he is gorgeous, hehe)and am awaiting the rest of the story. What happens from here? Is Yuzuru duped into actions he shouldn't be? How does this affect Naoe and Takaya? More! On a side note, a mention wasn't needed and makes me blush. (Oh, not really, I can't blush for real!) Thanks.
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Reviewed By: B On: July 11, 2004 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I just love this fic !! I love the romance of it and the action!! I cant wait for the next chapter!! Please keep it going, its one of the best fics I've ever read. I think I must have read this 8 times just waiting for updates :) Thanks again!! Great job !!
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Reviewed By: Got no name... On: July 09, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh. I'm so biased when rating... But *gurgles* I can't express how fascinated I am by this fic, and how everyone's feelings can move me, so that I feel what they're feeling and so strongly. *grin* And I hope you will continue writing with enthusiasm... cause I know I'll be awaiting the next chapter somewhat impatiently. :)
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Reviewed By: wilyfox34 On: July 09, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never have I been so taken with a fic that I sit and read it in one sitting. This story is that good. I was pleased to see that you remained true to the characters. Your last chapter left me wanting more and soon. Yes, I'm not surprised that the slimey Kousaka was behind Yuzura's most recent actions. Don't they all no that nothing will come between the Taka-Kag/Naoe relationship. I can't criticize because I loved this story from beginning to end. Update soon.
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Title: eee!
Reviewed By: Banshee Puppet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kousaka!!!! Soo cool. hah. I'm psyched. He's a slithery little reptile of a man, but I like him! This story is still my fav, so keep it up!
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Title: Cool fic!
Reviewed By: Yuzuki On: June 14, 2004 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a brilliant fic! The storyline is awesome. I actually laughed at Yuzuru's density in Chapter 3 when he's with Saori. XD I'm not worried that he'll hurt you, I'm worried that he LIKES you! Sheesh. XDXD OMG, that line was great! I enjoy your fanfic thoroughly so far. I have yet to read the rest of the chapters. I'm sure I won't be disappointed. ^_^
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Reviewed By: HogwortsFire On: May 21, 2004 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best Mirage of Blaze fic I've ever read. In fact, one of the best fics of all time. I love this! It's one of my favorites because not only is it interesting and keeps me coming back for more, but you stay so true to the characters' personalities, which is fantastic. Write more soon, please!
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