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"Cruel Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ]
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 Reviewed By: Foreverlace [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved the story. It was awesome. The DVD'S are awesome. Give me more.
 Reviewed By: Sanada  On: May 15, 2004 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love your fic! Please add another chapter soon k? You are doing great with writing this!
 Reviewed By: Floretta  On: May 14, 2004 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Never would have guessed this was your first fan fic. You are doing a wonderful job. This fic is hot!hot!hot! I am a *HUGE* fan of MoB and was glad that someone has finally given this wonderful anime the star treatment. I have read some fics (Mostly oneshot) but this is the longest and most incredible MoB fic that I have ever read. Everything about this fic rings true. Everyone is in character and the intimate moments are intense and hot. JUst what you would expect after 400 years. My thought would be that Naoe would never let Kagetora (Takaya) leave his bed after waiting so long to get him there. This is a great, great fic. As long as you continue to write I will continue to read. I can't wait for the next chapter update.
 Reviewed By: Banshee Puppet [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 10, 2004 00:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. It's good to see MoB here on mediaminer, means less random web searches for me. Such a hard fandom to obsess over when there are so few fics but this one is really good and is going right to my fav stories list! I love your characterizations, and you're writing style flows very naturally--simple, but elegant and very easy to get caught up in. Takaya is a stubborn fool, as always, but we probably wouldn't love him half as much if he wasn't! heh. Keep up the great work. I shall patiently await future chapters.
 Reviewed By: Cole'sLover  On: April 24, 2004 14:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU. I was about to go nuts from the suspense. You really know how to write a steamy fanfic for this anime. The story has an excellent blend of angst/romance. Keep up the wonderful work. ^_^
 Reviewed By: NK  On: April 24, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HOT HOT HOT! Wow, what a great chapter, you keep on writting, and I'll keep on reading. I love the dynamics between these two, and your fluid writting style adds so much to the story. It doesn't detract from the characters, emotions, and I love that I always feel I can "see" whats going on, instead of going, now how were they again? Brilliant.
 Reviewed By: Somegirl-Morning  On: April 18, 2004 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please write more soon! ^_^ I just started watching the series and now I'm hooked. Sadly there aren't many fics on this series anywhere. >_< Please keep going. Your writing is excellent!
 Reviewed By: Cole'sLover  On: April 10, 2004 15:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, this story is ssssooo cool. Please, please post another chapter soon. Considering this is your first fanic you are doing a fantastic job. Now if only someone would post another dozen or so stories we, the fans of Mirage of Blaze, would be in Bishie heaven.
 Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2004 23:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
God, I've been missing out! I had no idea you'd been updating regularly. This was so intense. The emotions between the two are electric. This is a powderkeg of passion, and I like it a lot.
 Reviewed By: Naoe's Fanboy  On: April 03, 2004 00:10 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice to see you updated so soon. Another great chapter! Though I'm beginning to wonder if Naoe and Takaya will ever be happy. Please continue!
 Reviewed By: Shadow-Wolf  On: March 14, 2004 19:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please keep writing. Excellent story and looking forward to further chapters. Please don't stop.
 Reviewed By: Sailor Pookie  On: March 14, 2004 02:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I never would have guessed that this was your first fanfic. The fic is well-written and flows smoothly. Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work:)
 Reviewed By: Cole'sLover  On: March 13, 2004 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I am SSSSOOOO glad you posted another chapter so soon. I am really enjoying this fanfic. Hopefully more fans of this anime will start posting additional stories. I guess you could say you're a pioneer in paving the way for the Mirage of Blaze fanfics. Keep up the great writing.
 Reviewed By: Naoe's fanboy  On: March 12, 2004 16:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write more! I would say this is the best MoB fic I've read if it wasn't the only one I've read. They're so hard to find. All the more reason to continue, ne? Please update soon, I love it.
 Reviewed By: Cole'sLover  On: March 06, 2004 13:27 CST
Comment/Review:
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU! I have been waiting for so long for someone to post some Mirage of Blaze fanfics. I have the 4-vol. DVD set at home. I was so frustrated with the way the anime series ended that I almost cried. Just when things were really heating up between these two the seris ended. I wonder if the manga will come out here in the States? Please post soon. This story is SSSSSOOOO good. I like your writing style because it captures the characters so well. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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