| "Heart of the Beast" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 19:32 EDT
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Well, I normally don't read these types of fics (I have such a squeamish stomach) but I saw you wrote it and I was curious. You really did an excellent job with this. The thoughts that go through poor Bulma's mind are so detailed and so well written. The actions of the characters are believable given the situation. Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 19:53 EDT
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This is really well done. I'm not at ALL a fan of torture and rape but I appreciate psychological angst and drama, and clearly there was more at work here than just a titillating bondage scene. I could tell you were building the drama maturely, so (with one eye closed! :-) I kept reading, and chapter 3 was so worthwhile because you've really captured the essence of Vegeta's character in this scene--his maliciousness, sexiness, and his strict declaration that he is NOT Frieza! You've got Bulma down too, as fiesty as all get out. And the details about Freiza's morphing crotch and V's masturbating tail were different and appreciated by this reader. Chapt 3 was really fascinating. Like I said before--not a fan of this sort of setting at all but I know talent when I see it! Keep with it and I'll keep reading.
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Title: heart of the beast
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 18:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know that while i was reading this story over i came to the conclusion that i'm not sure if i really like this story.you see if i was the one being raped and then raped again why would i enjoy it.these people are horrible and whats see going though is bad enough.look i know that it's just a story .in fact it's your story,but to me it's far fetch.i'm not saying that it might end up a good one but i find just really sad for what she has to go though...give me a holla ok...maria
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: July 19, 2004 06:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey VBQ! I'm SO glad to see you haven't forgotten about this story, 'cause I sure haven't ^_~ The angst and psychological stuff is great and I truly hope you give us a new chapter to chew on (really soon?... crosses fingers). Ja ne!
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Title: Loving this story
Reviewed By: scorpion-moochie On: July 19, 2004 05:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is moochie here! I just wanted to tell you that I loved this chapter! Hell I loved all of them! This story has that vibe to it that makes me wanna read more... Addicted to it... Hmmm now that the real question! I think I am... After I read the first chapter I just wanted to read more! I love reading dark stories! Can't wait to read more!!!!
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Title: heart of the beast
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 17:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was so strong.this is very different then what i've read in the past,very powerful..update soon ok.and let me know..maria
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Reviewed By: torte On: April 29, 2004 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey I just read your fic and it´s truly amazing!!! Wow you are so talented!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: spini On: April 21, 2004 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey it´s me again! I just wanna ask when you gonna update!? I hope real soon,´cause your fic is so cool and great!! Really! Keepit up please!!!
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really dark; different fic. I am not a fan of rape, but the whole Freiza anatomy part and the way he has sex really captivated me. I have enjoyed what I have read so far. Keep udating soon.
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Reviewed By: torte On: March 20, 2004 12:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey when is the next update? I go mad, if it takes any longer! AHH. Please hurry! Love your fanfics!
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Reviewed By: Nynke On: March 09, 2004 14:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, UPDATE, or I'll go mad! It's really a great story, please update. I want to know what happens next!!! Can't hardly wait! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Darkness On: March 05, 2004 07:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're doing a great job keep it up
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Reviewed By: G4NQ574 On: February 29, 2004 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it coming because it is a very good story & im kinda impatient so can you bring it in fast...Your an excellent writer
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 29, 2004 18:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i absolutely love it!!!! another great chapter. VEGETA IS SO HOT!!!! IF I WAS BULMA, I HAVE NO SECOND THOUGHT ABOUT HAVING SEX WITH HIM HELL....ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!! vegeta(drowling)
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Reviewed By: sp0ini On: February 29, 2004 09:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
man I love that fic! You rock! Veggie is so hot...
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