| "Heart of the Beast" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: Encore!
Reviewed By: Psytrance On: December 27, 2010 05:29 EST
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This story is amazing! I'm generally not a fan of A/U's but this fic is just too interesting not to mention amazingly written! I see you haven't updated in a while, I hope you will soon...I wanna find out what Vegeta has planned for poor Bulma hehehehe... Great job, hope you consider picking this story up! |
Title: nice.
Reviewed By: free-sprit, to lazy to log in. On: June 21, 2005 14:03 EDT
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I really love this, but I have a feeling that you're not gonan update, are you? It's not fair. It's really great, you just can't stop it! Please? Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: tears on you On: April 09, 2005 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. update soon because this is just magnificent.
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: August 05, 2004 03:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
i dont want to sound like im copying everyone else, but i love it!!! i just hope u update soon!!!
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Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: HotGirl1201 On: July 28, 2004 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It is just so good. Your style of writing, grammer and spelling are really good! And call me sick but I really like it with rape and torture and stuff. I know it really weird and stuff but I HATE mushy gushy fics! I can not read them I will maybe read like one chapter and then I just have to stop! I can't read anymore! But anyway You have to update!
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: Deranged Medicine On: July 27, 2004 04:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, moochie here! I loved this chapter! Not all the blood as the rest but it was still good! lol... Looking forwoard to the next chapter!!! :D
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Reviewed By: kageko On: July 25, 2004 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wicked story!!! i hope you update soon, i can't wait to read the rest :)
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Reviewed By: NSBnotlogged in On: July 25, 2004 17:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bulma75 (not logged in) On: July 24, 2004 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Update soon
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 19:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
you updated with a nice long chapter! My favorite so far--I thought it was full of great psychological stuff, intriguing details (those Saiyans muching donuts and arms was fun!) and hey, that was one cool description of V killing as a means of sexual release. I'm a little squeamish about what's to come, but I'm so into the storyline, there's no stopping me now from following this story! Great job!
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Title: heart of the beast
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 24, 2004 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this chapter.lol...i'm sorry for bulma in the next chapter..i know thats he's mad and what thats going to mean for her. so i'll wait until then...maria
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 19:32 EDT
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Well, I normally don't read these types of fics (I have such a squeamish stomach) but I saw you wrote it and I was curious. You really did an excellent job with this. The thoughts that go through poor Bulma's mind are so detailed and so well written. The actions of the characters are believable given the situation. Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 19:53 EDT
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This is really well done. I'm not at ALL a fan of torture and rape but I appreciate psychological angst and drama, and clearly there was more at work here than just a titillating bondage scene. I could tell you were building the drama maturely, so (with one eye closed! :-) I kept reading, and chapter 3 was so worthwhile because you've really captured the essence of Vegeta's character in this scene--his maliciousness, sexiness, and his strict declaration that he is NOT Frieza! You've got Bulma down too, as fiesty as all get out. And the details about Freiza's morphing crotch and V's masturbating tail were different and appreciated by this reader. Chapt 3 was really fascinating. Like I said before--not a fan of this sort of setting at all but I know talent when I see it! Keep with it and I'll keep reading.
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Title: heart of the beast
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 18:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know that while i was reading this story over i came to the conclusion that i'm not sure if i really like this story.you see if i was the one being raped and then raped again why would i enjoy it.these people are horrible and whats see going though is bad enough.look i know that it's just a story .in fact it's your story,but to me it's far fetch.i'm not saying that it might end up a good one but i find just really sad for what she has to go though...give me a holla ok...maria
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: July 19, 2004 06:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey VBQ! I'm SO glad to see you haven't forgotten about this story, 'cause I sure haven't ^_~ The angst and psychological stuff is great and I truly hope you give us a new chapter to chew on (really soon?... crosses fingers). Ja ne!
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