| "Heart of the Beast" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: Loving this story
Reviewed By: scorpion-moochie On: July 19, 2004 05:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is moochie here! I just wanted to tell you that I loved this chapter! Hell I loved all of them! This story has that vibe to it that makes me wanna read more... Addicted to it... Hmmm now that the real question! I think I am... After I read the first chapter I just wanted to read more! I love reading dark stories! Can't wait to read more!!!!
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Title: heart of the beast
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 17:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was so strong.this is very different then what i've read in the past,very powerful..update soon ok.and let me know..maria
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Reviewed By: torte On: April 29, 2004 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey I just read your fic and it´s truly amazing!!! Wow you are so talented!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: spini On: April 21, 2004 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey it´s me again! I just wanna ask when you gonna update!? I hope real soon,´cause your fic is so cool and great!! Really! Keepit up please!!!
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really dark; different fic. I am not a fan of rape, but the whole Freiza anatomy part and the way he has sex really captivated me. I have enjoyed what I have read so far. Keep udating soon.
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Reviewed By: torte On: March 20, 2004 12:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey when is the next update? I go mad, if it takes any longer! AHH. Please hurry! Love your fanfics!
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Reviewed By: Nynke On: March 09, 2004 14:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, UPDATE, or I'll go mad! It's really a great story, please update. I want to know what happens next!!! Can't hardly wait! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Darkness On: March 05, 2004 07:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're doing a great job keep it up
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Reviewed By: G4NQ574 On: February 29, 2004 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it coming because it is a very good story & im kinda impatient so can you bring it in fast...Your an excellent writer
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 29, 2004 18:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i absolutely love it!!!! another great chapter. VEGETA IS SO HOT!!!! IF I WAS BULMA, I HAVE NO SECOND THOUGHT ABOUT HAVING SEX WITH HIM HELL....ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!! vegeta(drowling)
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Reviewed By: sp0ini On: February 29, 2004 09:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
man I love that fic! You rock! Veggie is so hot...
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 28, 2004 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
another great chapter. yeah!!!! yeah!!! yeah!!! go vegeta...go vegeta... got to love vegeta...he's hot and sexy...
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA(not logged in) On: February 28, 2004 14:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowser!!!!!!! Keep the chapies on coming ! wow! I hate frezza that bastard asshole bitch ! Poor Bulma godamn please continue UPDATE PLEASE LATER!
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Reviewed By: vegetas girl On: February 28, 2004 12:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ithought it was great please write some more soon thanks, later
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Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolios! This is really good. I lke how you made the 2nd chapter a cliffie...Yeah. This is great, and...different lol!
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