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Reviewed By: lynks On: June 08, 2004 12:05 EDT
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omg! i cant believe u did that to me! aahhhh cliff hanger! i want to die *.* lol it was awesome tho and i cant wait for the next chapter!!! LiL Elf
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 11:11 EDT
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Yo! what the hell happened??? Don't tell me rin is dying :*(. What did that damn monk do to her?? Plz update soon the suspense is already killing me.
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Title: The best RIN/SESS FANFIC
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 03:24 EDT
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This story is so good it shouldn't be allowed to just be a fanfiction. It should really be published, but you don't own the rights to it...fuck. I enjoyed reading this chapter...it wasn't long to me. I read it, loved it, learn from it. I wish there was away this story can keep on going. I enjoyed myself so much reading it...I am sad that it'll be ending soon. ::cries::
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 02:48 EDT
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this is a outstanding fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 08, 2004 02:25 EDT
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What in the cocka doddle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is Rin dying!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! What is Sesshoumaru going to do!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? The past between Master Li and Master Sumida was sooo sad!!!!!!!!! He was her mate and then he left her all alone!!!!!!! And Sesshoumaru couldn't understand that she made promise? It was Master li's dying wish, how could he not understand that? Oh! I found a mistake it was when Master Sumida said "I sense not a weak sole in this room", it should have been "soul" because I don't think she was talking about anyone's shoes ^_^ But I thought Rin wasn't going to take his powers because she would use them for herself? And now she's like following him in death and I know Sesshoumaru is going to go crazy and choke Master Sumida out for letting her do it!!!! Please update soon, that was such a good chapter with such an evil cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And trust me we do not mind it if the chapters are really long, your loyal readers consider it as a really good thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hey there
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 17:22 EDT
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I finally finished all the chapters and LIKE I said before I believe this story was well-written. I'm going to be sad when your finally finish because this is the best Sess/Rin fic I've ever read. I want to thank you for taking the time out and writing this original piece. ::applauds:: I cannot wait for the next chapter to arrive.
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Reviewed By: Zetus-chan On: June 05, 2004 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 15:36 EDT
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Well written amongst the many chapters...can't wait till I finally make it to the end. =)
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Title: Entertaining and well-done!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 03:50 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru is one of the more enigmatic characters on the show--very cool, but definitely a mystery. You've done a great job of showing one of the possible developments of the Rin/Sess relationship, and I love the internal and external jeopardies you give your characters. You make them work hard for their happy ending, and that makes for a compelling read. I also like how you've characterized an adult Rin--she's very capable and intelligent and still as devoted as ever to her Sesshoumaru-sama. A couple of nitpicks, mostly with anachronisms--a sixteenth-century woman wouldn't know "sex toy" or "hormones" and I found the use of those phrases a little jarring when used during Rin's point-of-view. But those are really minor points--you tell a great story, and I can't wait to see what happens once Rin returns to the castle and is introduced to the council and allies as Sesshoumaru's mate. I'm sure there will be fireworks, and not just the sexual kind, either. *grin* Keep up the good work! (I've noticed that the readers on MediaMiner tend to leave fewer reviews than ff.net. Not sure why that is.)
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Title: ..........
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 23:21 EDT
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Title: Me again
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 23:14 EDT
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I was up late reading five chapters of your story. I am like so addicted. I haven't finished it yet, but I am getting there and I love every minute of it. I don't think Sesshomaru is out of character at all...you captured him really well. Don't thank us for reviewing...we should thank you for writing this original piece. It's something us fans want to read about. Well, me anyway. "Kay
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Reviewed By: DeathsAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 17:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I have come to a couple conclusions 1)you are either a yoga master/teacher or are really into yoga. 2)you are a really into Tai Chi Chuan, which I don't really know what that is. 3)both 1 and 2 4)just really good at doing research. I prey it's number four because you would be scary. I truly love your Rin/Sesshomaru fanfics they just grab me and won't let me stop which can be a bad thing since you can keep a story going for so long with them still having the affect to where I don't want to do anything but read them! Well please update soon cause I'm still feeling that way while I am also exausted. But your a great writer!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 23:12 EDT
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Title: I loved chapter 8
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 22:41 EDT
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Hey I am reading as many chaps to your story a day. I am really feeling this fan fiction for sure. I mean...I noticed that you apologized for making chapter 8 long and I'm like...is he/she kidding? Everything in chapter 8...is so fitting to the tale. I'll review as I read. Thank you for this fan fiction. This is such a original piece. I love it!
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Title: Hey there!
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 03:18 EDT
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I just started reading your story and I absolutely loved every minute of it. I can't wait till I reach your more updated parts. This is so original and so unique. I got to finish it for sure!
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