| "Payback's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: Payback's A Bitch
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 22:22 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: chibi baka On: January 27, 2005 01:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls do more chappys please? its soo good i havent anything like it
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Reviewed By: turtleyoukai On: November 29, 2004 13:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was entertaining.. I would really like it if did some more chapters in it...... *_^
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Title: Payback's a Bitch
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 24, 2004 19:58 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kanamehimura On: November 12, 2004 01:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it up until you left it a a cliff hanger. It was good But I wish to know what happens next..What happens when she runs off? other than that very very good work!!
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Title: Payback's a Bitch
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 04, 2004 18:30 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: graciestanton On: November 01, 2004 21:32 EST
Comment/Review:
omg!!!! nooooooooooooooooo please please please don't make it a sess/kag!!!!!! pleaseeeeeeeee!!! im begging you! don't ruin this awsomely awsome story with a sess/kag!! im gonna die... i was so excited to see how inu/kag got together!!!! awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww man!!!!! can you make some weird twist where she falls back in love with inuyasha?! please!? i'll love you forever!!!!!! I'll recommend the story story to my friend and she can put it in her fanfic!!!! BUT only if you make it inu/kag!!!!!!!!!! pleeeaaase????? sesshomaru should be with an adult rin... or kagura!!!!! i'll love you fooorrreeeeeevvvvveeeerrrrrrr!!! this is like the longest reveiw i've written in my life!!!!!! i really have to stress this!!!!!!! sorry sorry sorry.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 20:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go sister me likey I cant wait to read the next chapter and see I didnt make u write this chapter so im so proud of u my big sis is finally growin up yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bye bye
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Title: Payback's a Bitch
Reviewed By: RitsukieChan On: October 31, 2004 12:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THIKING?! What the hell happened to Kagome and Inuyasha, Whaa....If it turns out this will be Sesshoumaru and Kagome all I can say is that you will have one less reader. I'm mad a you and I'll sick all my trees on you that I will! Wee attack tree's attack!! That's right my prettis get the evil author! Hehe, please dont make this a Sesshoumaru and Kagome fic, please please dont. Or I'll pull out the man eating paper to! Hurry up and update,but donemake this reviewer sad!!!!
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Title: ...hmmm
Reviewed By: fallenangel8138 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 01:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
~~ your story is great from beginning to where you are now...you have so much wonderful detail added in the first chapters that illuminate each of your characters depostions and their motivations to a defined point. your writting style and word choices are excellet, and i must say i was blown away when you said you are only 13. great job so far....so....now the constructive critizem (is that even an accurate term? really...think about it!) i feel like you rushed into the chapters beginning with the journey into the underworld (like most heroic epics). from all of this great set up and plot divulsion, suddenly they have the jewel shard, are fighting Naraku and kicking the clay pots ass in two chapters. you set yourself up so absoltuly wonderfully in the beginning that i was lost in the following chapters becasue of how fast things changed. i can't help but notice the wonderful talent that you have in your words that i feel like you pushed to fast to get the rest out. writting, like most things in life, is a gift. never rush it, never make yourself do it. enjoy it, your good at it. :-) (damn, i feel like a goddamned parent or teacher now.) flame me if you want but i really think you have a talent that should not be overlooked. don't rush it and you'll be great.
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Reviewed By: Silver wolf kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great. i can't wait to find out what happens next. pleases update soon.
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Title: keeping hopes up
Reviewed By: Sessy's girl On: August 29, 2004 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't even worry about that bitch that wrote that comment just keep writing cuz your story is good
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Reviewed By: Starfire27 On: August 13, 2004 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful, just beautiful!! I BEG OF YOU PLEASE UPDATE VERY VERY VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Um. No. On: August 03, 2004 11:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
Here's what I don't understand. There are some great stories here that only get 200 visits, and three reviews, and this gets thousands of visits and dozens of reviews... when it's trash.
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Reviewed By: persons On: August 02, 2004 00:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
wtf happened to seshomoru raping kogome? went from smashing her into a tree to killing dead earth girl
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