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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved how supportively domineering dear hiei is over the full circumstances of Inu Sess and Kouga's deaths from kags PoV. Shizuru flustered is so perfect. She's always so unflappable. The tension in teh air is vibrating no matter how it seems like somting is ansered it is always gaining new questions. by this point my brain is shutting down on figuring it out, and just waiting! glad you're back and hope you had a great holiday with your family. Worth the wait
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 18:32 CDT
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argh MM screwed up on me, sorry.. :( wrong reveiw!
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil evil evil, Thanks so much for relieving the withdrawal symptoms with an update. Poor Hiei probably should have had the "want do YOU see for our future, because I want you in mine" talk rather then the Skew this farce approach but then tact isn't his strong point, he's so very direct. Wouldn't Kagome have sensed youki in the bracelet? Incidently, thats a new low even for sneaky kitsunes. Too bad I love his pretty red (or silver) hair too much to say "scalp him". *grin* I sense some major major angst soon, and I'd hate to see the partners killing eachother, but can't imagine Hiei's reactions.. first would be betrayal (probably on kagome,) but on finding out about the bracelet? I'm building a bomb shelter, you might want to join me if those boys get down to it ;) Let alone HER boys finding out.
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Reviewed By: ponty On: September 28, 2005 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa very well written although I wish it had been a little more intimate, I suppose I'm just a hentai, anyway one thing I have a problem with is lemons with no background story leading up to them, however your work had a lot of story behind it even if I feel that final realisation of Inu Yasha's feelings about kikyo were not reached. I hope you continue writing. pontathon
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Reviewed By: eternalshiva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 16:25 CDT
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>.> hello? it's almost been a year ; ; will you be writting a new chapter soon?
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 00:05 CDT
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please write more!
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Reviewed By: maniac mansion On: April 04, 2005 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is really great!! When wi'll you update? I'm waiting for this!!! Please, keep it.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totally LOVE this story so far, and the lemon was okay but one thing you could do is work on the details, and make it a little longer, you know drag it out, make us wait for the good part, and maybe a little more forplay, I've never writen a lemon my self, but I've read a lot! but if this was your first lemon then it was like I said okay. keep up the great work and PLEASE update again soon! I REALLY want to know what happens! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... don't feel dirty. I thought it was great. It certainly had me blushing (and I mean that in the best of ways!) You're doing such a wonderful job with this story! I do hope you find some time to continue in the near future. Keep up the awesome work. I will definitely be keeping track of this story. You have alot of talent. Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 19:29 CST
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I think you did a wonderful job with the lemon! Having written one myself for a one-shot, I can tell you that I was nervous as all heck while writing it since it was my first one. Half of me was giggling like a silly 13 yr old at the naughty words I was typing while the other half was in shock that I was typing any of it at all! Somehow it was written. :) I like your take on things regarding how much experience Inu may or may not have in the intimacy department. I know when I was writing my story, I wasn't sure how I wanted to pursue that angle...I think I ended up with the usual approach and let "instinct" explain everything. But you've touched on a new aspect for your story with him leaving Kags... unsatisfied. Somehow, Inu boy is going to have to learn how to please her and that can make for more fun lemons. Ok, I'm harping on the lemon issue just cuz you asked for feedback about it...but on a more general level, I'm still greatly enjoying your story very much. The quality of the writing is wonderful and I'm still astonished by the creative plot. It's hard to be unique in the IY fanfic universe! Alrighty then, I do hope you update soon!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 17:44 CST
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I just read your whole story including the lemon and I loved it. Wow. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: happylama2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 23:55 CST
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whoops, I didn't mean to do that twice. Sorry, I didn't think the first one posted.
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Reviewed By: happylama2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 23:54 CST
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No reason to feel dirty! That was a well done lemon, no "orbs of pleasure" or pulsing ANYTHINGS. Very nice. I've been reading this fic since its inception, I think, and I continue to enjoy each new chapter. Good job! Thanks a lot :)
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Reviewed By: happylama2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 23:53 CST
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No reason to feel dirty! That was a well done lemon, there were no "orbs of pleasure" or "throbbing members." I've had this fic on my watch list since it's inception, I think, and I continue to enjoy each new chapter. Good job! Thanks :)
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 nli On: November 26, 2004 22:06 CST
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Gaspeth! First the Kouga, then the... yeah, and you are SO COOL!!! ^^^^^^^
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