| "To Nowhere" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 not logged in On: April 11, 2004 13:59 CDT
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Whoa! It gets interesting!! Haha... Koga's getting shown up!!
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Title: Write more please
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good please write more soon please
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Title: Turoosh
Reviewed By: Turoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 17:01 CDT
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You're doing just fine. A good story teller does not explain everything all at once. The action will keep a story moving along, but it is the interaction between the characters that give it substance. Just don't leave us hanging.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 14:26 CDT
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Yay! Yay! YAY!!!! *hugs the author* THANK YOU!!!! FINALLY a good plot, good grammar and spelling, and Kikyo is dead! Long live Maruchan-sama!!! Write more please?
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 04, 2004 23:14 CDT
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Great story! I can't wait to read more. Thanks!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story write more please
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 18:41 CST
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This is great. Please continue. I want to know what is going to happen. i love this stuff.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 09:38 CST
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I think you should put them in the story. the is get great please write more
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Title: Turoosh
Reviewed By: Turoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't be discouraged by the limited no. of reviews so far. This is a well written story and I am looking forward to the next chapter. The fact that you have removed Naraku, Sango, and Miroku from the main story line, forces IY and Kag to reevaulate their relationship with each other. Keep it coming.
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Title: Write more please
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please.this is great please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed in i think) On: March 18, 2004 03:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. you gave me the chills, i like it so far. that was wicked. please update asap. or i might keel over and die. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Writer of Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a well writen story. I cannot wait for the next update.... but since this is the last shard... you are going to make them leave each other? v.v? lol ~InuNeko~
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed in) On: March 03, 2004 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooo O.o Inuyasha being perverted works for me! well great chapter. cannot wait till you update. the story gets good as the plot thickens muahahahahah that is if there is a plot to speak of at this point but oh well. keep up the good work and update asap. peas and carrots? Krystal.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 23:49 CST
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hey that was great. i cannot wait until you update. keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 18, 2004 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this is good!
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