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Reviewed By: Faye273(NLI) On: June 21, 2004 00:51 CDT
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I'm glad you are happy with this chapter, it's very good. Thanks for the regular updates, it's a real treat. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann *nsi* On: June 20, 2004 18:16 CDT
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ooh I love this new chap, where did Inu go and why isnt he there? yes I know hes mad and hurt but he never leaves Kagome alone for long and he always makes sure theres food and that she is safe, and what did Miroku and Sango see? well Sango anyway since I dont think Miroku saw it lol, cant wait to find out and see what is going to happen, will Inu find Kagome?? cant wait another great chap, cant wait for more ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 (nli) On: June 20, 2004 15:48 CDT
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Hay! what happens?? Come on, maruchan-sama, update!!
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Reviewed By: Krista On: June 20, 2004 13:02 CDT
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I really love this fanfiction! =) Please keep updating update soon! This last chapter ended, and I must know where Inuyasha is! *Smile* Inuyasha: LET ME OUT OF HERE! SHE'S CRAZY! Krista: ITS PUTS THE LOTION ON ITS SKIN OR ELSE ITS GETS THE HOSE AGAIN! ;D
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed in) On: June 20, 2004 03:12 CDT
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great chapter! i can't wait to see what happens next! This is soo exciting!!! lol well, please keep up the great work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Elfling On: June 18, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT! I've trying to find this fic since my links disappeared! I love it, and the new chappys to my (anything past eight...) are great! Keep up the good werk! Elfling
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Reviewed By: eternalshiva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Excellent fic ^_^ this was recommended in a fanfic e-mail listing and I'm glad I looked it up ^_^ Keep up the good work and maybe you could review mine some time ^_^ Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: JigglyPuff25 On: June 17, 2004 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! Awesome fic! I'll have to finish reading it tomorrow because I'm exausted... Anyways, great story! You can check mine, if you want, at: www.fanfiction.net/~jigglypuff25 Looking foward to reading more! ~JigglyPuff25
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Reviewed By: AutumnFire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done! I read this after a member of an IY mailing list recommended it. I read the entire story straight through (shh--don't tell my workplace!) and I think you're doing a very good job. Don't give up. You have a great deal of potential. First off, some words you use incorrectly can easily be fixed. "Weary" means tired, and you've been using it instead of "wary" or "leery", both of which indicate caution and suspicion on the part of the character. Simple fixes like this will be extremely easy on your part and make your story more polished. I really like how you make the relationships up and down. Relationships are complicated things and take a great deal of hard work. I like the way you've depicted that. It's also understandable that it's hard for Kagome because she's only 16. Who hasn't had problems with just BEING 16, much less having to save countless other lives? I'll be following your story with great interest. Keep up the great work! AutumnFire
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Title: Mija
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 05:46 CDT
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hello, this fic was referred to me by one of my lists and they said it was a totally wonderfull fic that wasnt getting its due and ya know what?? they were totally right, you have awsome writing abilities and a great story here, you deserve way more reviews than youve gotten, this story is wonderfull and I for one totally love it and cant wait to read more, Ive been up for hours reading from chap one to the latest just now and I am so anxious to read more I cant wait to see an update, dont give up on this fic, it truelly is very very good, much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 20:28 CDT
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This fic was recommended by someone on a yahoo group...and i'm glad they did! just read your story up to now & i want to say that the story has been intriguing, funny, sad, angsty and fluffy all rolled into one story. can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 19:20 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 02:28 CDT
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ooo look i'm gunna review! lol I'm still interested in the story and it's sad...all this angsty stuff is really depressing. Please keep up the good work and update asap. I love this story! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 nli On: June 15, 2004 18:33 CDT
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Ooooh... Kagome whupped his a$$ good... *whipping noise*
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 (NLI) On: May 19, 2004 17:10 CDT
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Yay!! Another good chapter!! Arigatou! ^_^
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