| "Hold Your Light" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 20:29 EDT
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You cruel person! How could you just stop at chapter 14?! Continue or I'll hurt you!
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 06:43 EST
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*poke* you alive? I am waiting for the next chapter, its really good but I would like to see more... *poke poke*
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Reviewed By: Ishtaral On: January 25, 2005 18:03 EST
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Wonderful story, I hope that you will continue soon.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 13:49 EST
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I am really liking how you potrayed all the characters. Its a ver different look to it all. I think htere needs to be more Duo angst... I mean... he wen't through his own shit in his time. But I am just a Duo fanatic so that might be why I think so.I can't wait to se how you will get the 1x2x3 relationship part down and how that all will work out. Good job. Can't wait to read more. Hopefully it won't take 3 months to get it out.... I am hoping. Well, good job and continue the good work
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Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 01:06 EST
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I'm glad to see a new chapter for this fic and I'll check out the new story later. Hmm... I wonder how much of that conversation Trowa heard. At least now the three of them are in the same place and can talk it out.
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Title: OI!! I talk a lot....
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 03:11 EDT
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...I can't help it! Another wondeful chapter!! *blushes* you're welcomes, but I can't help but comment about this story, i love it! *hmm doesn't approve of Duo smoking recommends he chews gum instead, big smile* And please forgive me if I'm not as critical - but i'm just so enamorlo- as others I try though. i hadn't expected this outcome but I think Duo's confrontation with Trowa is very good although I'm sure he feels like a *coughs* shit for bursting Tro's bubble but atleast Tro isn't acusing heero anylonger or atleast his accusations have been deflated a bit. Man really duo could use a release of his own- putting up with both boys emotional turmoil and using himself as away to get them to let it isn't always good tactic. As we can see he's being physically attacked and left out in the cold a lot with minimal comfort/reassurance that what he's doing is right. I agree with Tro, that he shouldn't be coddled and treated like an invalid. I'm glad he speaks out about it and I'm glad that he didn't turn Duo's releasal of him from the kissyface as rejection. I hope you're having a great summer and thank you for commitment to your readers! ***HUGS***
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Reviewed By: priscel-huge sparkling eyes- On: July 26, 2004 06:57 EDT
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Yes!~does alittle dance, coughs and tries to display that she's sane by quietly returning to her seat~ umm... yea Tro-chan's talking more! And Duo now feels that his presence and efforts aren't invain! Although Tro-chan is in a state of duress I'm sure he'll notice the marks on Duo. on the swingy couchporch thing i'm sure he didn't 'cuz hee-chan only saw it from his sitting postion but Duo reached out for the sheets and again for tro himself... i'm sure he had a peek and at this point tro may not realize it. I just hope Tro doesn't read too much into it. He doesn't seem to be dellusional but he could turn around and attack heero for it if he lets the abuse cloud his judgement. Oi I talked more than i intended! *glomps evilkat* thankyou for the acknowledgement, your a wonderful writer and updates are well worth the wait. you deserve lots of hugs and hmm Candy yes lots of candy! *hopes you don't mind sharing* note: ep-chan went home for the summer and if she sees this take care!
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Title: Hold Your Light: 11
Reviewed By: Yohji Aya and Amanda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 13:08 EDT
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Wow, I mean Wow. I am so blown away by your fic please post the next chapter soon. The interaction between your caracters is awsome.
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Title: bad heero, bad!
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 13:12 EDT
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WAHOO!!! thank you, I was starting to worry...welcome back too! Heero's becoming a bit abusive isn't he?! I know he doesn't mean it and that he's probably using his actions to display/convey what he's feeling since he doesn't have the words...doesn't know how to tell Duo how he's feeling. Man the whole armbonebreaking grab thing...seemed to have sexual inclinations, I'm glad Heero didn't act on them...I was concerned for Duo for a moment. Man, Duo needs someone to talk to and lean on for support with these two guys. And Tro!! Oh man, I hope he doesn't force himself deeper into his depression and self-loathing... I think Duo could possibably love Tro and Hee-chan too (unawares to him at the moment but it's there), and the same for Heero but he's so confused about all his emotions and having trouble expressing them while combating his soldier-default persona. lol maybe I should try to be a psychologist aye? lol anxiously, but calmly waiting for the next update And takecare!
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Title: Oh Joy of joys!!!
Reviewed By: priscel-not logged in On: May 14, 2004 12:43 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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*sunbursting smile* I'm so happy to see an update!! (^_^) and I was wondering all the support and comfort and understanding Duo is dishing was going to affect. Although he doesn't see it, it very taxing on him and I'm hoping that signs of this will show more as they work together to help Tro. sigh... I know Heero's going through some stuff but he's also very needy of Duo, he can offer up the comfort but I feel that the stoic prusian blue heart throb, won't show as dramatic a drain as Duo cuz he's more on the receiving end of the comfort and on autopilot as soldier boy at times. I love his openness... I had a feeling that Tro wouldn't agree with having Heero and Duo watch him. He needs them badly and dare I say Duo even more, he's so comfortable with him and I think the addition of Heero's love will make all the difference if they can get him at that I don't needanyoneIcantakecareofmyself! state of mind. Maybe Duo gets really ill or has to go on a mission and doesn't come back when he is suppose to. That might bring him out of the 'me' complex long enough to crack his self depracation and see how much he needs someone... needs them... caring and helping someone else helps others realize things at times. Can't wait for update!!! I love this story!! I love duo *blushes* wow i had a lot to say
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Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: May 14, 2004 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhh! I'm so sorry that it has been so long since I've reviewed, but I'm still alive. I love this story so so very much, and I'm really thrilled that you're updating so often. I think the way you're handling Trowa is great...I hate to see him in pain (but I love the intense angst -- contradictory, I suppose), but his reactions to everything -- touch, news, people meddling, his past, etc. -- seem just...right. And he's so adorable when he's puppy-ish and needy. So keep it up. I do very much hope for a happy happy ending for everyone, but I'll read and adore whatever you write. Can't wait for more updates. You rock.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 23:32 EDT
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I am enjoying the story, though I hate to see my beautiful Tro in so much pain. I hate seeing all of them in any kind of pain. I hope to read the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv (not logged in) On: April 26, 2004 01:31 EDT
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Love the chapter. I think the story is progressing fairly well. Though, I do suggest you try not to read it when your emotions are quite fragile. You can't help but cry at certain points. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rhiaonna_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 10:47 EDT
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I think they should go all the way, but that's just me. Great story can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 18:34 EDT
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sorry all, gotta take care of a little runt. Evilkat-san arigato
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