| "Hold Your Light" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: April 15, 2004 18:33 EDT
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HEY! you're no grown up atleast not in the head! (snickers and runs out of comp lab after posting this) bye!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 18:31 EDT
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(bops ep-chan on the head!) hey why are you reading this I'll tell! this is for grown ups!! --to evilkat-- sorry writing the wrong review much earlier! this is a really interesting story and I hope both Duo and Heero can help Trowa get better.
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: April 15, 2004 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Does this mean there'll be a lemon!!??
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 18:27 EDT
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Wahoo!! Duo and Heero are all kissy face!!
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Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: April 13, 2004 02:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, WOW! This story is amazing, and I am always overjoyed when you update. The angst and general emotional discomfort is something I love (that's sick, possibly...but I also cling to eventual happy endings. Anyway...), and you write it so well. I love Heero the way you're developing him, and I always love Duo as seme. But to the point. I would love to see Heero and Duo get it on, but I guess I would have them wait a bit, until everyone's psyches calm down at least a little. Whatever you decide, though, I'll be thrilled to pieces with. Oh, and please take good care of Trowa! He's soooo cute when he's cuddly. Keep writing, onegai!
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Reviewed By: duoandheerolover On: April 13, 2004 01:17 EDT
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Let them go all the way!! Heero needs to experience the greatness in the art of love making.
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Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I should have written a review sooner when I first found this story but I'm lazy and I never do anything when I first think about it. This is an awesome story. You have a very good plot line going and its developing very nicely. You rreeeaaaalllyyyy want to know what I think about Duo and Heero? -evil fangirl smirk- I think something should happen between them....-smirk fades- but then Trowa could get all weird about it....but then maybe not.....o.o'' I guess thats all for you to decide. ^______^ Whatever happens though, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Niere [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, very...intense. I'm always happy to see an update. In answer to your question, I think that Heero had a lousy first time and that Duo could show him just how great sex should be.
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Reviewed By: Write more On: April 06, 2004 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is sooo good. I love the plot. Please write more I just HAVE to find out what happens next. So please update. *Gets down on knees and begs*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 07:22 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE!! I knew it!!! I knew Nora was important to Heero. Gee angsty...Heero...sigh. I need to read the rest of it but WAA I don't have any more time today. It's a great story with a very unique in its on right. Thank you for writing and please continue!!! thanks
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Reviewed By: Nittle Grasper Wonder [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 10:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! wonderful, wonderful job! please update soon, i just have to know what he's going to say! ^^
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Reviewed By: Fire of phoenix On: March 06, 2004 16:50 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So will we ever find out what happened to Trowa?! I hope you update soon and this story is 1x2x3. I have not read one of those before, so it will be coolies!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: March 01, 2004 12:23 EST
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U know, im not usually a 2x3 fan but for this i make an exception. Your not as evil since u ended on a happy note. ;) Any hoo, i guess ending with cliffhangers keeps us begging for more. Keep up the good work. Chow
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Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: March 01, 2004 00:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arigato, evilkat-san! This chapter was so very good, just like the past two. I realize that it could be extraneous to post my second review piggy-back to the first, but what the heck? I wanted to let you know how very happy I am that you didn't abandon this story or float off into space somewhere. It's really terrific, and I'm all for emotional torture (for some reason that's how I express my love for anime characters). So I'm really excited to see where you're going to take this, and I shall be here for the ride.
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Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: February 26, 2004 01:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh! Please please please please update again soon! This story is so incredibly good so far, and I love the way you've written Duo-chan and Trowa and Heero. But please have pity and add more chapters soon, because I am inordinately concerned for the bishonen. Arigato!
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