| "Hold Your Light" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cynthia Finnegan On: November 28, 2011 08:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm giving this a "9" because you never finished it. If this story is up for adoption, I can finish it for you. |
Reviewed By: cclynn100 On: June 21, 2010 03:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story!! Thank you so much for writing it!! I look forward to an update (if there is one)
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Reviewed By: Jonesie On: August 08, 2009 16:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As dark as the subject material is, this was a fantastically detailed, in-character story. It has the realism that so often lacking in fanfiction of this sort, and never strays into cheap thrills or needless sex. I see that you're still writing fanfiction, and I wanted to express my hope that you'll finish this story one day. I understand abandoning projects and losing inspiration in fanworks, but "Hold Your Light" truly is a singular story, and it would be a pity for to be unfinished. I actually found you over on AFF.net and tracked the story here to leave a review. So yeah, there it is, then. Either way, I'm a fan of your work.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 20:50 EST
Comment/Review:
awww man..you havent updated this in how long?
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Reviewed By: Golo On: October 11, 2006 22:02 EDT
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Oh, this is a really interesting fic! I haven't made it up to the current point, but I just had to drop you a quickie to let you know how much I'm enjoying it. Love the reactions, how realistic you're keeping them, and still keeping the characters IC really nicely, considering the situation. They all just need to get it on *cheers*. Very nicely done!
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 09:21 EDT
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Wow. Great chapter. Very evocative; it's so well done. I like your delicate handling of everything. And the specifics on just how strong Heero is were nice. It makes the concept very concrete for me, as opposed to the vague "Heero's superhuman."
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Title: GW Lazarus
Reviewed By: vox dei On: October 02, 2006 22:35 EDT
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I'm glad you saw fit to bring this fic back from the dead! Very harsh, realistic depiction of the boys- esp. Duo who you also show as human, overwhelmed, and beyond his depth with the mess... So will we see more of Wufei? Will Heero end up alone? Welcome back!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 21:24 EDT
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*hugs cuddles and chcolat coverd gundam wing boys* i may not say much in my reviews...other then i hope you keep writing. and i'll keep reading
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 16:59 EDT
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glad to see ya atleast updating, hope to read a new chapter from you soon, love luck and chocolat coverd duo lollypops!!
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good storyline, but would you hate me so much if i asked you to stray away from the 1x2x3, way more conflict that way. I love how your writing style. I feel so bad for Trowa. Keep writing .Keep updating. I haven't read a fanficton yet that had such focus on Trowa it's a pleasant change not to say his situation is a pleasant one. Loving it.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 10:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, a new chapter! Great writing. I didn't need to go back and read previous chapters, because it flowed so well. Wufei and Duo seem very natural. I don't feel like I'm reading a fictional work at all.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 13:21 EDT
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That is an old groaner.... the river comment I mean.. i'm sorry i just now got to reading this... i mean I'm sure I have before but this is really good and you should continue this as soon as possible.. please?
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Reviewed By: a fan that really likes this On: September 06, 2005 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very glad to see this story updated. It has been well over six months since i last read it, and i wasnt sure if you were going to continue. Very nicely done, this is one of my all time favorite stories!!! hope to see more soon...
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 01:12 EDT
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Oh my fucking god! You are one of the greatest authors of drama fanfiction I've ever seen
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Reviewed By: Moon_Dreamer On: June 26, 2005 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I've just read the entire thing today and I hope you update soon. I can't begin to imagine all the emotions the the guys feel. Hell I was crying during someof the chapters. I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update really soon.
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