| "I've wanted you forever and tonight" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: melodyz_07 On: May 12, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fic! This is a really good one! The plot is original and I loved the way the story was progressing. The last chapters where Seto lost control of his mind and took Jou as a slave were the best. And the end is very original also. I actually didn't excpect an end like this one.
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Reviewed By: jordana On: January 28, 2007 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: I'm angry and disgruntled!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrr..! I made the mistake of not continuing to read this fic as you updated it. This was one of my favorite fics EVER and now that I have finished it, I must say, I'm very .. sad T_T and mad at you! I do not like the way the fic changed direction around chapter 18. The whole mood of the story just pretty much changed from there on. I don't get the ending/epilogue/whatever thing for my life and I'm too angry to re-read it ._. Around chapter 18, Seto seemed to get very OOC and Jou stopped using his weird accent, which boggled me. I'm so angry ;-; I'd punish you if I could !!! Maybe it's just my grief talking; I never like when stories end. But.. this ending confused me. I don't mind that Seto and Jou didn't have sex but .. did Deavous come back or something @_@?! RAWRRR I'm going to go eat something to calm my nerves. I still love the story. I'm just sad about how it ended :(
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Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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MAN! THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST FICS I EVER READ IN MY LIFE! KEEP WRITTIN' AND GOD OR ANY SUPRIME FORCE YOU BELIVE BLESS YOUR TALENT.NEVER CONSIDERED TO BE A WRITER OR PUBLISH A BOOK? I KNOW A LOT OF PEOPLE WOULD BUY THEM!NOS VEMOS!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 12:00 CST
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Hm, I'm not so sure I like the ending... but oh well. I'm kinda sad the story ended. Hope to see a new fic soon, or a new chapter to a different story, like maybe... *hint,hint* Kourui? Cya!
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Title: *claps wildly*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 15, 2006 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome ending!!! It just left you with the warm and fuzzy's ^_^ I was thinking that it was all a little TOO easy, but you showed that he actually gave up, so that means.... YAY FOR HAPPY ENDINGS!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the ending and the epilogue. I thought Deavous died a little too easily. Great story.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 11:17 CST
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Yes!! Thank u for bringing Seto back!! Man, I never thought I would miss him... Haha, I LOVE it when authors make Jou and Seto fight and then randomly start making-out, it's the greatest!! I do hope Seto stays in control for a while... although that description of "one eye red, one eye blue" did sound pretty cool... anyway, cya!
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Title: hurray
Reviewed By: :) On: December 30, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray another update! plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last two chapters were great. Update soon, plese.
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Reviewed By: slash_glory [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You mean to tell me that I've been reading this fic forever and I haven't commented until now?! So sorry about that! Wah. But, if I've kept on reading, you must be doing something right. :3 This fic is yummy and I would like more. Oh, and a question: in the last chapter, when you described Seto has having one eye turning red while the other remaining blue, did you get that visual from somewhere? I only ask because I was reminded of a doujinshi cover with Seto on it, almost exactly like that. Hope you don't think I'm accusing you of anything, but when I read that part, the pic came to mind, and it was nice to have such a visual. :3 Here's the link if you'd like to see what I'm talking about. If it doesn't work and you're interested, message me somehow and I'll get back to you. :3 http://www.zelas.net/doujinshi/adinncover.jpg
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Title: *claps*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar(when I"m logged in) On: December 27, 2005 00:18 CST
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I approve! While I would rather read a lemon with Good-Seto, Evil-Seto seems to be developing some form of emotions. Do i sense uneasy co-existence in the future? Haha, since I love this fic., naturally I think ANY wait for updates is too long. After all, I was never too into Yugioh fics until I read yours ^_^ Could we have a little peek at how Good-Seto's holdin' up once in a while? Umm... I would love to give you some helpful pointers on what you're messing up on and how to fix it... but I really have no complaints! You're damn good at this, (as you should be by now, but you were good in the beginning too) and, well, yay for updates!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 16:05 CST
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@_@ Um... the whole "1st hunt" flashback thing has got me feeling queasy... or else I've been online for too long. Anyway, the lemon was pretty good, I liked it. I do kinda miss the real Seto, though... Cya!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 07:30 CST
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This was good. I hope the real Seto gets out soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. I hope you update soon.
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