| "Jewel of the Chaotic Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 16:58 CST
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lookie I'm back!! anyways Update. It will make all happy and stuff.
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Title: plz cobtinue
Reviewed By: amanda01 On: March 20, 2004 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo! WHAZ UP plz contiue soon *punches cousin* *starts mumbling* stpid cousin thinks he can sneak away fron his chores *stops mumbling* hey anyway continue my cool bro sides with me well be seezing ya!!
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Reviewed By: sessome On: March 20, 2004 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is...awesome, dats all i can say...its original and wow, and amazing, keep it up and good job, really good job. update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: (blackkazekitsune) not signed in On: March 20, 2004 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
squee! *clap clap clap* such greatness! i love the plot... or maybe its just Kurama but i think its the none cliched plot. oh. i can tell u y we dont review just read... cuase were lazy god damn LAZY. thats the reason. i havent even signed in either...
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Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore (not logged in) On: March 20, 2004 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKAASAN?!? OKAASAN!?! OMG!!!! Ashita is Youko's 'kaasan? I didn't see that coming... Well...that's an interesting turn of events. But...Kagome doesn't know that. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOO MUCH SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! GREAT story do far, by the way!!
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Reviewed By: J.B On: March 20, 2004 11:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yaaaaaay you updated!!!But I'm still going to review you if you take more then a week to update the next chapter.I'm just joking.anyways great chapter!
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 14:20 CST
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Please update!!I'm so going to review this every day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dude I'm not joking I really liked this story!so please!!!
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Reviewed By: Reiya Moon On: March 18, 2004 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
please update soon I'm likein' the story
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good.I was really upset that it ended at ch.3, so please UPDATE please please please.if not I wont stop reviewing you.I'm not joking.
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Title: LOVE, LOVE it
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Hurry and update. Can't wait to see when you bring in Kurama and the rest of the Spirit Decetives.
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Reviewed By: Angel of the Twilght On: March 11, 2004 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!I liked the way you discribed Kagome's painting.You should find someone to draw/paint it for you, and post it here.Plz plz plz plz update soon!I can't wait 'till the YuYu gang show up!
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Reviewed By: shadownekko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this soon this is such a wonderful story so far!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love the story I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_demoness On: February 24, 2004 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story, love your storyline so far. Can't wait to see your new chapter!!
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Title: WOWS
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is, WOW! The only fault I found with your fic is the spelling of one name, I\'d be more than happy to help you spell some of the names and weapons if you\'d like. My email is: aino_senshi_luna@yahoo.com Btw, GREAT fic, I can\'t wait to see what happens next. P.S. It isn\'t Modoriko, it\'s \"Midoriko\" An easy way to remember this is by remembering the translation: Green Child \"Midori\" = Green \"Ko\" = Child. I hope that helps!
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