| "Jewel of the Chaotic Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkGodessAluthri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 13:25 CDT
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Loved it! Update soon! (I know you probably get tired of that phrase, but I couldn't help myself, lol)
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 15:40 CDT
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Wow that was like your 86th review...wow.
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 15:39 CDT
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To tell the truth I have no clue what I was on the last time I reviewed...O_O, okay so great chap. not complaining anymore cause I take Forever*echos* ummm, to update some of my fics. So I wont hold it against you.... *somewhere* Fangirl: Arrghhhh! Jb takes FOREVER *echos* to update. *back with Jb* you know my mirror self still didn't come back... I'll go now.... FOREVER!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cindii On: July 30, 2004 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. This fic is amazing. I love everything about it. I hope you'll update really soon. PLEASE update really soon. I'll be waiting!!!
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Title: Help
Reviewed By: Hi On: July 28, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This storry is really Good Im sorry if this is rood or anying Bu tI need to ask erevy 1 TO tell me what name they like. Engolish Japanese Love............Robe TheSea..........Fusea TheOcean........Fuosean Ocean...........Oseanu Cry.............Kuri Tear............Tearu Tears...........Tearusu Rain............Rainu Raindrops.......Rainderopusu Cryingocean.....Kuriingoseanu Blood...........Buroodo Redran..........Rederanu Fate............Fute Wispers.........Uisuperusu Z...............Zu Bat.............Batsu Moon............Moonu Bluemoon........Buruemoonu Black...........Burakuku Penk............Penku Blue............Burue Plum............Purumu Wind............Uindo Flight..........Furigufutsu FullMoon........Fururumoonu Sonset..........Sonsetsu Sky.............Suki Beloved.........Berobedo Day.............Deyu Darck...........Deruku May.............Mayu Angel...........Anjiru Im sorry if this is rood But pleases help me
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Reviewed By: Hishi On: July 26, 2004 15:04 CDT
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Nice job!!
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Reviewed By: Lisa A On: July 24, 2004 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. My friend recommended me this story, and I think it's really good!! Your story sequence was very believable, and I'm glad you didn't rush into the relationships like some of the other stories I've read. Either way, really good job!!! And hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 22:29 CDT
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alrighty! time for another post by yours truly! ^_^ ok get them bak to skool! i mean, come on! kurama is koolios in skool situations! and kagome. and you had BETTER make kagome learn of kurama in the next chappy! ((please? :(?)) and you should get some more conflicts going on! like kwabara-hiei tension! ^_^ or better yet, kagome-hiei! they should hate each other's guts... *evil smilez* oh ya and HURRY UP ON THAT NEXT CHAPTER! >:@ *randomly kills* make kurama say something horribly embarrasing and totally sappy! ^_^ thats fun to humiliate kurama! ^_^ even though he totally ROCKS!!!! and you better introduce rin... and DONT kill anyone! arigato! kerina!
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 17:31 CDT
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oh and update.... okay I'm really going now... really.
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Reviewed By: xXJBxXInuyashaXxJBXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 17:29 CDT
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Jb: Yaaaaaaaaay!! Okay... I'm on this thing...a trance of some sort...And I'm just wondering when you'll update again...Ummmm or else I'll have to hunt you down in your sleep and well... you don't want to know... ???: YOU!!!!!!! WHAT do you think you are doing? Jb: Ummmm writing a review duh. ???: I see that! Jb: Soooo...wait your not the normal voices I hear!!!! ???: Dude chill I'm you, talking to you. You see you're looking in a mirror... Jb:Ohhhhh... Well that explains a few things... I always thought the mirror was a door way to an alternat universy thingy... but my refection will do... Mirror Jb: I'm hopeless....*walks away* Random dude: yup, yup! Jb:~.~* thanks...Anyways UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in at the time) On: July 23, 2004 17:03 CDT
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You are doing nothing wrong! I mmyself am captivated every time you update! This chapter was very cool, and its nice to know every one knows that Kagome is finally an ancient. Though now i wonder how Kagome will act when she goes back to school. (If she does of course) But i guess ill find out in future chapters ^_~ hope its soon!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 16:32 CDT
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an other wonderfull chapter I must say! and it was long too! I like long chapters! don't worry you updated soon enofe! what I meant by not updateing soon enofe was like, when authors don't update in five months at a time. as long as the updates are within two month I wont forget! oh ya one more thing.......UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: July 15, 2004 17:50 CDT
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this is closley related to foxlove on fanfiction.net? but somehow better any wayz update plz ********* ** ************ **** ********* ** ********** * * * ** * ** * * * * ********* ** * * * * ********* ** * * * * ** ******** * ********* *** ** ******** ************ ***
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Reviewed By: InsaneAUTHORESS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 17:57 CDT
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NOOO! MUST SAVE SOUTA! *coughs* Your style is great, and i loved how you added the white roses. It seemed so sad... Though I'm beginning to think the tentai are stupid! Don't they know who the ancients are? Well i guess not but i thought Hiei might know. Or is it a secret? Anywasy great chapter i adored the part when Kagome's ki exploded and EVERY one with a wiff of Spiritual Awarness could feel her...
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: July 13, 2004 19:46 CDT
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NNNNOOOOOO! SOUTA!! *glares* he'd better not die...
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